Awwe, cuteness. They're such an awesome couple.

CUTE! Did I see a little Gildarts quote in there? Did you now this reminds me so much of Ouran High school Host Club, when Tamaki finds out that Haruhi is afraid of thunderstorms and then again when Hikaru comforts Haruhi in a storm! Have you watched OHHC? If not you should, it's cute.

wow this was amazingly cute and fluffy! XD really nice one-shot!

you didn't realize that was the perfect kissing scene right there. I liked it by the way

I just choked on my spit. "I haven't slept in her bed in a long time"? Ahem...coughcough, or is that just me with my mind in the gutter? But that middle section had me cracking up. Weirder than usual, huh? LOL
Such a sweet chapter! ::wipes away tears::
He's such a sweetie! And it's fine about the kiss scene, and the ending is NOT crappy. Frankly, I think that if you added the kiss scene it would be a bit OOC for Natsu, so you did completely fine wonderful authoress!

So cute omg I love this one shot I read like 3 times! Kawaiii!

It was a cute little story :)

Good job! It's really cute

this was a nice oneshot :) great job! i had never hear of jasmine thompson before so i went and looked her up and wow she does have a really pretty voice :D (listening to her right now lol)

There was a scene like this in Ouran High School Host Club. I can see poor Lucy hiding in a closet with a comforter andnher hands over her ears. The funniest thing is at the next BOOM Lucy says “Why havent you overcome Erza yet?”

Awwwww! such a cute story. It will forever be one of my favourites!

Cute story! Thank you for introducing me to jasmine! She is really good :D

I L.O.V.E this!

I love it! It's a really cute story even if they are not kissing in the end. I continues imagine what will happen next and then - Boom they were kissing! Sounds weird, huh?
Anyways: Nice idea with the thunder it was awesome! I really like it :3