I knew it would ended like that, I kind of predicted it. However I really liked it and it would be really awesome if you were to turn this into a story.

This was really good!

love this one shot so much can't wait for the sequel I though it sounded like a story you'd tell a child, but it seems a little too obvious I mean if it's before the curse was broken shouldn't she not remember a thing at all not even a glimmer where as the story makes it seem like she does remember anyway plz hurry with the sequel

Love this! I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Oh yeah :D Sequel Please! That was AMAZING!

excellent first chapter and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Awwww... That is sooo sweet! Please,do write a sequel!

Hi I enjoyed it very much an think you should continue it

How Sweet! ! I love Henry That was so In character for him even though he's younger here! I hope this venison isn't the Evil Pan :} does Little Henry have a crush on "Lisa:

SEQUEL PLEASE! I LOVE IT!

Omg! I love it! I love Wendy and Peter as a couple, and Wendy breaking down Peter's walls and making him a softie inside! I want to know what happened originally between her and Peter before the curse and to see what it would be like if they were reunited again after the curse! This is so awesome!

i loved this story so much! i would love if you maybe kept going or even better a sequel! )

FUCKING LOVE IT! :D

Awe so cute and yes please write the real story of what happened it' be cool