| Reviews for The Other Stark (Finally and Fully Revised as of November of 2018) |
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   bonkxd chapter 20 . 7/29 fuck this story she was raped and then she is defending the rapist xd is this fucking sweden? |
| bonkxd chapter 18 . 7/29 ehehe xd loki raped and im gonna be sorry for him people just misunderstand him hehexd |
| bonkxd chapter 13 . 7/29 ok so she just knows that she is a daughter of a goddess and doesn't even talk to Thor about that? I mean shouldn't she go to Asgard to learn how to control her powers and stuff? |
| Linette chapter 54 . 3/30 What is going to happing with The group efter The snap now. And i hope The you writhe more |
| Sarki chapter 11 . 3/26 Until now I quite liked your story. But wtf why would Loki sexually assault her like that. That is so out of character. And she doesn't seem to be that traumatized by it. Your story is getting worse and worse. Sorry but I have to stop reading. |
| beth626 chapter 54 . 2/13 I absolutely adore Tyra. My daughter is HFA and she could totally be Tyra. Please update soon. |
| Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 11 . 10/26/2019 Ok I have to stop reading this. I am sick and tired, I am sick and tired, I am sick and tired, I am sick and tired OF PEOPLE TURNING WOMEN INTO DAMSELS-IN-FUCKING-DISTRESS. ITS NOT FUCKING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT TO HAVE A WOMAN BEING FUCKING CAPTURED EVERY FIVE FUCKING MINUTES! THIS CLICHE NEEDS TO FUCKING DIE ALREADY! *Sigh* I'm sorry for my outburst, but you are just hammering that cliche into our heads. |
| LordPeverell chapter 18 . 9/5/2019 So, I want to continue reading this, but are you even going to deviate from the movie script at all? You've given her visions of the future but she changes absolutely fuck all. She saved her dad from going through the portal with the nuke, then had him get the weird ptsd from seeing that shit anyway. She saw Frigga die and that was the whole reason she went after Thor, then didn't change anything. Is this gonna be another fucking original character is along for the MCU story? Where nothing changes other than having an additional character there stealing lines? Can you let me know if its even worth continuing to read this story? Also, this Loki shit is insane. He sexually assaulted her and she claims to hate him, then still wants to know if he is doing ok? WTF, nobody would react like that. |
| LAWDgivemestrength chapter 54 . 8/8/2019 I'm so invested in this story. I love the emotional ups and downs with Tyra. I also choose Strange over Rogers soooooo if that could happen that would be great. I rwally think you should keep up with the great work. |
| kelsey-kianna chapter 22 . 7/18/2019 Are you a filipino? Cause you used a word like “merienda”, btw I’m a filipino too just saying. HAHAHHA I was just shokt too see that word |
| azureice20 chapter 54 . 5/20/2019 I've seen it. Message meeeeee |
| Ana Zaira Stark chapter 52 . 5/9/2019 I just read that you edited chapter 48! If Morgan appeared in Tyra's vision that means that her baby is not going to die, right? Right? He said it, a part of him in many ways will be with her, that means that her baby must live! |
| Neredia chapter 54 . 4/29/2019 I just spent the last two days binge reading this and holy crap, I love this story. I can't wait to read what you have planned next. I hope Tyra gets her baby back and she and Stephen stay together. Considering Steve's storyline in Endgame. Looking forward to what's next |
| animexchick chapter 54 . 4/28/2019 Holy crap this story is awesome! I'm so glad I found it on my day off so could have a full and proper binge of it all. Ive just realized... When they bring back everyone who died because of the snap, would that bring back her baby to? Because I was getting all fangirly over a Tyra/Stephen baby before the snap can't wait for more, hope there's an update soon because I am hooked! |
| TillyPan chapter 54 . 4/27/2019 Your story is sosososo good. Hope you can start write End Game. I actually hope the baby is still here when you rewrite the story. |
