They are developing nicely!

Loved it. And looking forward to seeing how you wrap it up, as you say.

Lol. Too good. Oh and congrats on law school. And good luck!

This is nice. I like the change. I feel like it might have been nice to have one transition chapter between though, like a realization chapter for Lucy? But that’s just an idea. I think it’s good like this too. Looking forward to the next.

Oof. Ouch. Yeah that was a chapter. Very well written. Also, congrats on graduating!

Yep that clears everything up. Wow. It hit the fan indeed

Excellent chapter. Truly heart wrenching. Brought up some old memories. You did this sort of scene justice.

Oh dear. *adjusts monocle * yes indeed. That is a cliffhanger. Hm.

I loved the bit of insight on Natsu! Wonderful.

All I can say is phew. Sigh of relief.

Phew. Definitely going the dark route I see. Well it’s amazing so far. Excellent job. I can’t put it down.

Phew, riding on the edge of my seat there for a bit. Talk about tense! Also...I really wanted to smack Lucy into standing up for herself, but I know that sometimes fear does overcome us, so I restrained myself. Lol. Excellent chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Lol, so I obviously missed the fork. But I’ll still answer. Personally, I like a good mix of both light and dark. Some good dark for intrigue and emotion and some light to cut though it with a bit of humor. I like dark humor too. So far I’m really enjoying the way this story is going, it’s hitting all the right notes for me. So I’m sure whatever direction you went it’ll be good.

Super fun so far. I can’t wait to see where this goes.

Omgg next chap pls