Please make more very curious to see what will happen

More please. I seriously see so much potential and awesomeness for me to love even more out of this than I already do. Yeah that was word vomit but there is a plea for more somewhere in the word vomit.

I'm really excited to see where this story goes! Keep on writing, please!

Lol aren't they always. Update soon!

You tell him Darcy! Stick up for yo self.

...I'm going to be completely honest, when I first read the title I thought you were referring to the shooter genre of video games. Semantics.

oooohhhh. I like where this is going:) Please update again soon!

can jane be pregnat too?
that would make it really intrestng...two hormonal,pregant women...lol

Oh please keep going!

Yes yes yes continue! i love your idea. I love loki and i really like darcy and i just think that if they ever did met in a movie that they would instantly click
I hope you update soon! :)

this story is so amazing! i really like it :)

I really like where this is going. I hope you continue.

KEEP GOING! I'll keep reading.

Oh shit. Darcy and Loki are screwed haha. Can't wait to see what he does with that information.

Wow, Loki was an ass at the end there. Keep it going, I want to see the rest of the fall-out. Jane and Thor's reactions ought to be interesting.