| Reviews for Hero of the Everyman |
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   iStyx chapter 8 . 8/25 Yeah, nothing screams about girl's affection better as her beating the crap out of him. You have really retarded understanding of romance. |
| ViolaMagistrate chapter 1 . 5/29 I have't read that much, but it seems that the romance between Jaune and Weiss is a bit forced and not natural. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/8/2019 Alright this is absolutely horrible. Can't read this anymore, waay too black and white for a realistic fic. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/8/2019 the fuck r u doing dude, you're purposefully conjuring up psychotic villains just to simply fulfil the need FOR a villain. You know that stories work perfectly fine without exaggerated antagonists, I know you might've learnt in school that ppl dig evil villains and the greater the contrast between good and evil the better. But it makes ur story unrealistic and cannabalizes the original character. Shame on you. And Weiss punching jaune after such a beating? That's utterly ridiculous if only to cling onto the template tsundere theme u have going on for her. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2019 I don't really appreciate you making Weiss into a damsel in distress. Maybe if you'd explained her altered backstory abit more that would work, I'm not opposed to it but she's rly ooc right now. Even Neptune didn't do this to her back in the show. |
| Spidersauce chapter 6 . 6/2/2019 Eh. I don't like Cardin in this story. What he did what blatant attempted murder. No two ways about it. All he got for it was detentions? Not even restricted movements or the like? I feel like you try too hard to make him the antagonist. |
| Malgrath chapter 16 . 1/15/2019 BLOOD FOR THE SANDWICH GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SPAGHETTI LORDS! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2018 This is perhaps one of my favorite fics on this site to date and I only just finnished the first chapter. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/29/2018 long live white knight |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 good love you |
| PredatorPuck chapter 23 . 1/29/2018 lol loved it, but you did leave out what exactly happened to arc family, and why Jaune lost his aura fully to Slade... so there is that |
| PredatorPuck chapter 1 . 1/28/2018 hmm you got Jaune's actual semblance right and what did happen to his family? |
| ThanksForTheRead chapter 23 . 1/2/2018 Reached the end (story was wrapped up nicely) and ahh the feels... Russell was cool in this story, Kia was my favourite OC, Payne and Jonas were well written OCs, Pyrrha playing wingwoman was new, and of course Weiss remains my favourite character in RWBY. Still wished for that last reunion scene with Kia and Jaune while Weiss is also with him though... Regardless, the villain was good, as was Cardin, and all in all a good read, kudos to you for going back to this fic and editing in 2016 (this fic deserves more attention) and I can only hope that you will make more Weiss/Jaune stories in future :) |
| ThanksForTheRead chapter 17 . 1/1/2018 Jaune and Kia's friendship still as cute as ever, hoping to see the two of then reunite in person at some point along with Slade. |
| ThanksForTheRead chapter 16 . 1/1/2018 Most intense food fight scene description ever read, definitely amusing and well done :) |
