I assume this fic is dead, which is quite a shame, was loving it so far!

it's sad that this seems to be abandoned because it is really good

You had a good story going here, why did you stop?

can you make it militaristic,more fun that way,it will be funny to see how the council race see that another race is FAR more strict than the turians

a pity that this work has been abandoned

I liked the chapter!

This is quite good, make more please. And the attack on hephestueas it was rather believable if a bit fast.

I really hope the Systems Alliance won't join, and will be requiring massive reparations from the turians, and keeping their full sovereignty, personally in these situations I'm a fan of going so far as keeping central human worlds completely closed off to the other races, after such a disastrous a first contact, it would be natural for them to be very suspicious of aliens for decades to come.

On another note this could really use a bit more proofreading, here's a bunch of errors I noticed when reading through it:

they can see to reason - they can be made to see reason

A foolish move -Thought Morvayn
-A foolish move. Thought Morvayn (only the actual thoughts should be in cursive)

begun to bring order to the peace - began to bring order and peace

begun to campaign - began to campaign (only spelled with a 'u' when connected to a helping verb)
labelled Destroyer - labelled a Destroyer

begun to head - began to head

begun to pace - began to pace

Begun researching their adversary well - they had begun researching their adversary as well

than allow it - rather than allow it

an enemies hands - an enemy's hands

it's type - its type

it's - its (same mistake a whole bunch of times, the possessive pronoun is without apostrophe, which you unfortunately seem to be unaware of)

The fire power of this vessel - The weapons of this vessel

their ship's - their ships'

Councillor's - Councillors (mixed up possessive with plural 9 times)

scarps - scraps

some what to - somewhat similar to

terrifying site - terrifying sight

What ever - Whatever

where are there forces - where are their forces

Bro! What is keeping you from completing this story?!

Overall a good chapter, but im just waiting for the humans to show the councilors their not the only ones who carry a big stick. Also if your still including TITANS please put in jump packs and let the soldiers defy the laws of gravity.

I know this sort of thing can be hard, but please don't give up. This was going pretty well, don't stop now. Finish it in a fashion you can be proud of instead of feeling regret at not finishing at all.

Righteous but I think in a realistic way. I love this story and really hope you update it soon it's to awesome to let go.

I think that a Righteous Humanity would be a better choice.

Enjoyed story so far. Biggest problem is lack of updates. A story this good I need updates lol. Humanity so far has been displayed as defending itself. How it acts during and after negotiations will determin what kind of society it is. Keep up the good work.