Shit shit shit cocksucker

please update this and complete Naruto X Tayuya is great but Naruto X Tayuya X Honoka this the first story i've seen with both of them paired with Naruto

Please update. It has been a long time since you continued this story. I love how the story is going and I want to see how Naruto shocks everyone with gravity release.

please continue this fic it has a good story line that should be completed

Hope for more

I do not know if you read reviews from older stories or not but please continue this fic for you have a good story line that should be continued I know rl comes first and you have other things to do but please consider continuing

Overall, this story could be amazing. If you shut up th damn characters. Also, I quite agree that Naruto is severly underpowered against everybody else. Pretty soon Itachi and Sasuke will switch eyes and then they will be pretty much as powerfull as Madara in canon. Two canon Madaras, an OP Guren on steroids, and a whole family of OP Uzumakis? And all that Naruto has are a couple of shadow clones that everybody is bored to death reading about and some telekinesis? Yeaaah. The only thing imppresive is his regeneration which he is really going to need with how much he is going to get killed.

he better be able to snap necks tk not like it will do anything with how hax people are one hit kill techniques appear to not do anything

first that was one of the best fights to death I have seen from hinata and that mirror idea was genius
two no wonder they think naruto jump ship so quick if his teammates don't get punished for trying to kill him.
3 that was one of the most sickening displays of nepotism I have ever seen in the fandom including the i'm an elite is the second time the greatest medic left him to die and his leader left him for Tsunade nor Guren has ever shown a single iota of care/love to Naruto as a family- how will they justify their Senju conscience when the only male Uzumaki will say that he will not require enemies if he have them as before the Uchiha were given excuses and killed family for powers you could see they felt something.

Second, team 7. While i believe that they only one against orochimaru was because of luck and the fact he both underestimated them and didn't know the extent of their abilities, they are, without a doubt, overpowered. There is NO reason for itachi to have the sword of totsuka(unless it's a natural part of his susanoo), and as a whole both Itachi's and Sasuke's control of their mangekyo's is too advanced to be realistic. hell orochimuru searched for the blade for years

two negi is still on the team after what he did no comment from guren his 'sister' about him nearly killing his brother

interesting how different this universe is yet people have changed considerably I like that

also .hell is wrong with the village I can buy negi lashing out that I understand but his reaction after words is unconcerned? no guilt,rage even self pity hell since just graduated even shock for first time killing.

then their naruto's 'family' no i have seen strangers care more for each other than this no desperate checking out their adaptive brother/son/weapon is alive no sadness over his death or hate for killing him
no wonder naruto cried a lifetime of tears already they did not even care to check

Alright you bring up a lot of good points. I can't seem to get a read on what kind of person Naruto is or what kind of alignment he has. Is he a dark hero, is he grey, is he just plain good with questionable... Morals. Oh right. Forgot about that. But my question still stands.

You mind of portrayed Naruto as much weaker than Sasuke and Itachi. I can also see that he would obviously not have been able to take on both Sasuke and Itachi. I won't add Yakumo because while I understand Genjutsu is very useful and powerful she had to have been a bit tired from chakra exhaustion. If the info is valid weren't girls said to have biologically smaller chakra reserves? Anyways, Sasuke and Itachi together as they are now would admittedly kill Naruto, even with the Kage bunshin cheat that I love with a passion. But you have to admit he would at least be able to take one of them on fighting solo. Seriously i would question the story otherwise.

I was also very impressed with how you calculated everything when it came to the canon timeline. I'm seriously hoping Naruto tears into Dan during the finals about his discoveries. It would be awesome to witness and a huge opening to reveal his true power.

Just going to say this, but Kakashi didn't say that one is considered jōnin level after mastering two elements; he said that one must have mastered two elements to become a jōnin. To be a jōnin, one must have a certain number of shinobi fields at jōnin level, and elemental manipulation is one of those fields, whereby the mastering of two elements is considered jōnin level. Compare it to speed or even the amount of chakra someone has; just because someone has jōnin level speed, such as Lee, or [at least] jōnin level chakra reserves, such as Naruto, doesn't necessarily mean that one can be considered a jōnin. Someone with only jōnin level skills in a specialized area would be considered a tokubetsu jōnin at most, and not a jōnin.

I've been wondering this, but does Naruto actually have the Rinnegan, or does he just have the Rinnegan's ability to manipulate gravity? Lately, I've been assuming the latter, as there has been no indication whatsoever to conclude otherwise, but clarification would be much appreciated.

Anyway, I have really loved the story so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I know it's been a little over a year since the last update, but that doesn't mean that I can't hope that you eventually come back to this story with one.

I hope to see NAruto come up with some jutsu that don't only revolve around gravity. IF he does, they need to surpass Nagato's gravity power due to it being his only part of the bloodline. I could see him getting the chakra chains int he future and using them in conjunction with his gravity. Hopefully he has the ability to also use some kind of immortality jutsu and resurrection.

Enjoyed the chapter

Ok great job, but you seriously overpowered team seven. With the amount of potential they have it seems like you are making Naruto lack. I mean he doesn't even have the rinnegon just gravity release. Also IF naruto took the body he would have a replacement for Kushina.

I hope he has more unique talents from the uzumake clan because as of now he is third rate in the elite. Two families can over power his biju. He does not have his full bloodline. And his rivals are all possess the full bloodlines with abilities to subdue him.