Awwwwwwwww. Ryder is so sweet, Martin's kind of sweet too. And seeing Charlie in this just breaks my heart even though it's another "universe" than we're here. Great story :)

This is one of the best things I find about fanfiction- we can have a thousand, millions of different stories- for the same stories! I mean- your picture of how and who Marley's dad is is totally different from mine- because we barely hear anything about him in the series. Get what I mean? It's kind of faascinating isn't it? Oh well... sidenotes... Hmm... I wonder how it would go with Ryder meeting him so I will keep on reading the second chapter too.

Righteous!

Awesome start!

Loved this! I would read about Marley meeting Ryder's parents, too

I love your stories so much! :)

Please write more Ryder and Marley! I just absolutely love Ryley and your Ryley stories!