| Reviews for The Pegasus Rider and the Dark Mage |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2017 Wow! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2017 :) |
JustMBM chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 I'M DYING OF CUTENESS 'Q' |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2014 Great pairing you did a wonderful job of capturing their personalities. |
SW chapter 1 . 5/12/2014 LOL GJGJ |
jvnko enoshima chapter 1 . 12/15/2013 reaaally cute! I love this. MOREEE FIRE EMBLEM YURI PLEASEEE . |
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 Hehe, your previous reviewer already said most of what I wanted to. Just wanted to add that I liked this as well, it was qt :D |
drumsticks650 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 Wow. Quite an unorthodox pairing, but... I thoroughly enjoyed it! It's also pretty fun to see drunk Cordelia, heh. A couple constructive criticisms, though. For one, while I liked the alternating perspectives (that writing style is pretty rarely seen here, but I quite enjoy it), the transitions are a little jarring without a line break or some other indication. And also, having Tharja take care of Cordelia in her drunken state is sweet and all, but the fact that she was still drunk during the confession kinda... Took away a little from the sincerity, or at least felt just a little wrong in some way. But maybe that's just me. Otherwise, I think you pulled it off with flying colors! Hope to see more from you at some point :) |