A great story. Wrex's line “So it begins.” had me laughing so hard!

Though I do have a bit of constructive criticism to give. When one changes scenes, one needs to add some kind of line break to show it so readers don't get confused. Nothing too serious.

Hope it helps!

HILARIOUS!

damn sexual innuendos, good story

great idea bud89!

great one-shot, full of laughs. i loved it.

Who knew washing a Mako could be so dangerous and hilarious at the same time:)

... I can't breathe...