Needs more chapters

i guess louise *puts on sunglasses* just got schooled

Liking it. Can't wait for more. Will Shego and Ron date?

Good luck and update soon.

By the way, they use gold as money.

I'm a new zealander as well. LOL. It is very rare to see any mention of NZ, let alone a kiwi writer. High five! I like your story by the way.

lol this is a funny story so far

They use gold coins

very good, loved

Nice to see a new chapter, keep up the nice work. :)

Nice Ron is a bad boy but is still kind,

so will the lotus blade talk now too?

also what are the pairings? Ron and Shego seem likely but will Ron have more?

and what of power levels it looks like Ron is stronger then the students and teachers so that makes shego stronger by a lot at how scarid Ron is but I hope they are equel I have read stories were the two of them go at it DBZ style and Shego is holding back agest Kim hope that is true here. so if S level is top and E the lowest were are they all? using the demon class from YU Yu hahusho as my guide.

Short but intresting chapter looking forward to more as you get the chance to post it.

I hope that you are still planning on writing this story for I was a big fan of the anime and it cool to see Ron and Shego in this realm and take the smart nose kids down a notch or two. I love this story so far and I'm looking forward to the chapter when Shego lights up and throws a little of her own "magic" around :)

I honestly don't want to say this but while I think that idea is great it got so much of unnecessary bashing(although Louise is like that at the beginning so that part is true). Characters are more or less out of it. It can be seriously bad at times though. Still it's a nice try. I thanks you for this story, cause despite it's flaws there were some moments I found interesting in it.

Seriously out of it. I mean Shego would have already blasted something hard and repeatedly, Ron refusals are more or less alright but his bloodthirstiness is worrying. It's like they switched personalities during transportation. Oh and in this dimension they use gold, though I don't remember the exact name of currency, so dollars remark is weird and again something that Shego might have done(although I'm pretty sure just the idea of violence would be enough for her).

What can I say the idea is sound but characters are out of it. I mean I do get why Shego and Ron might be, but others as well and this is not nice. Well regardless this is interesting.