Really enjoyed this story! I was actually worried that Jervis would have to kill Johnny.

Very nice story:)

Is there a sequel to this? If there isn't, there should be!

Loved this even more!
I have high hopes for Crane now :) I like seeing all of the villains together, behaving badly!

That made me smilel

I love the idea of Crane having a pet! But I was expecting it to go with the story. A little known fact is that Scarecrow had a pet Crow that he named Nightmare. Just thought you should know. :)

This was lovely. You've converted me to a pairing I had not 'shipped 'till now.

The characterizations of the various villains, their diction, their thought processes, and their respective motivations was great.

The conflicts faced by the two main characters were well fleshed out and the overall commentary on the series itself was an unexpected bonus.

You made me laugh several times in earnest.

Great pacing, too. The chapters felt self contained and were never truncated awkwardly or drawn out for too long. Never felt I had to skim ahead (which I admit I do occasionally.)

You could probably write for realisies. I've downloaded stiff on Comixology with worse writing.

Thanks for a great read. :)

What a lovely ending. It's nice for Johnny to have Lenore. And now that I've finished this one I will move on to the next story you have posted. :)

Aww. What a cute ending. I find it hilarious at Basil's overreaction! I wonder what he'll do if he's being criticized by the people at Rotten Tomatoes? Haha.

Awww another end it was a nice wrap up. Splendid as always :)

Aw! :)

(Too lazy to log on)

But I just read chapters seven and eight! Nice story! Ah, Karlo, I should've seen the plot twist! I mean I just finished replaying Arkham City for the tenth time earlier today, so when in doubt, if there's a plot twist, Clayface is somehow connected.

:)

Damn I'll give Karlo one thing he's a damn good actor. So that means he totally kissed poor Tetch. Man Batman is a douche, did not see that coming.

Poor Jervis! I'm rooting for him all the way! Batman must feel like a complete jerk! Haha.