Really? Thats it and here i was hoping for a real illness a bad one not bullcrap like this

awesome

I loved this so much and the shower scene had me laughing at what Grace told Chin. I would have been laughing like Cath.

I remember chicken pox were miserable. Poor Steve. Danny offering tranquilizer gun was awesome too. Keep up great work.

A sequel or more chapters would be welcomed.

when I was eight I got chicken pox, and within twenty-four hours my little sister, who was five, got them too. and, as if that wasn't bad enough, my dad had missed out on that particular hell when he was a kid, and he got them, too. I still don't know how my mom got all of us through those two weeks.

Love this.

So adorable. I liked Max getting a chance to do his part.

I loved Catherine taking control and taking care of Steve. Really nice work showing their closeness without tipping over into sappiness. Well done!

And it was really big of Danny to decide Steve gets a pass on the swear jar because of his fever.

I loved this so much! Bromance, mcroll and grace plus sickSteve. A real treat. Thank you!

Somehow I just posted a review that was blank, I think? Sorry. Had to logout to leave this one... I don't know what's wrong with me today...

Anyhow, I just wanted to say this was a very cute tale. I can completely see Steve being reluctant to admit he's sick. You wrote it all very believable.

Catherine, Danny and Grace taking care of him was so sweet. And reading this made me glad I had Chicken Pox as a kid. I tried to stay outside and avoid my little brother when he had them, not realizing I'd already been exposed.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story.

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LOVE it

This was really good, funny, romantic and sweet!
I loved Chin, (I can't stop laugh)
Grace is adorable... as usual!

Great story - the image of a spotty Steve brought a smile to my face! Great writing.

Loved this. But poor Steve!

This story was awesome. I love the relationship between Steve and Catherine, and that he lets her take care of him. I really loved the parts with Grace. Ihave a question about the ending, was Danny referring to what Freddy told Steve, or something else? Overall, this story was amazing and I can't wait to read more stories from you about the Five-0 team and Grace. Keep up the great work and post a new story soon please.

- nicole