I've always loved that picture, even though they only show it once. You did a great back story for it...

I really enjoyed this, one of my favourite one shots that I've read :)

I just love that you made a story out of the picture from the movies! I love that picture and always wondered about the possible back stories behind it. I love that you included the marauders in that moment. And having Snape's POV in your story was actually nice to have too.
Good job with this, loved it!

It's that photo! That is so cute! I loved it, and I love them, and awwww, poor Snape :( But I did notice a few things you could change...
When people speak, use commas instead of full stops if there's a "she said" or something like that after it. Also, your descriptions of the park where too forced. Try to slip them into the story more, with a few tiny details, instead of long and obvious descriptions. "Lily and them boys" should be "Lily and those boys".
I liked the differences in perspectives, you did those really well. I've always wondered who took that photo, because it was such a personal moment, so I love how you did that. It was very good :D

This was amazing!
The man playing music made me feel bad for him :(
But it was good!

Very nice. My heart is breaking for him.

This was a story about THE picture. I loved that short scene, so thanks for writing about it. :)

SOOOO SWEET :*