Omj. This story is so well done! *sigh* I wish you could have finished it.

OH MY GODDDD PLEASE CONTINUE!

I am desperate to read more. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon :)

Me: Hoe don't do it
ruffruffren: *writes absolutely beautiful masterpiece of a fanfic
Me: Oh my god

Literally on my toes with this fic ; u ;
Ren, oh Ren, what happened? I thought he was going to whisk Aoba away (actually praying for it) but Aoba gets captured? Ren did not betray him right? Like it's impossible and he practically doesn't even know anybody from there ; u ; and some parts got me confused on the window scene, was Ren looking at Aoba? Because Aoba wants Ren to look at him, doesn't he notice? Or was Ren actually looking at someone else?
And that they didn't recognize each other when they met again... were they really not looking at each other that time?
Hopefully Aoba gets rescued ; u ; (by Ren please please please, which makes me think, does he still have his horse haha, I wonder how he'd travel back though)
KOUJAKU IS AWESOME MUCH LOVE 3
And Noiz ; u ; why does Toue have to be such a bastard
I really super love this fic, and I'm sorry for the ridiculously long comment ; u ; I just have so many feels haha 3
Kudos! :)

Broken heart, imaginary boner long-since snapped in half, and a gut-clutching suspese that leaves me awaiting your next update to further cry myself to sleep... good job. you are literally the ONLY author that can give me such an emotional connection that I can actually feel the embarressment for the character.

Wonderful story, I hope you update soon.

This fanfiction is amazing and i love it to bits! Please continue it

Really as I read this i just want even more :D Please, oh please give us more of this wonderful story :))

Omg I live this story. If I was in Ren's place, I would fuck Aoba so freaking hard!

this is epic xD so awesome x3 I love how you wrote this soo beautifully x3 please continue this more xD this is one of the best fic in this fandom I've seen so far so please do update x3

Man, Ren must have some amount of will-power to behold if he can have Aoba on his lap without, so much as even touching him. I don't know what I would do in that situation.
Your use of descriptive langage was nice in this chapter. Good job.

Oh my god, Toue. You are such a liar and a creep. What a detestable man.
Perhaps Ren did not recognise Aoba without all his make-up and extra decorations?
Well done!

Oh, so Aoba has captured Koujaku's wandering heart and he visits the "Moon Flower" regularly? I assume Aoba's parents adopted Ren? Maybe not.
Wait, a flash of blue? Was it Aoba he saw that time? Or maybe that doesn't make sense since Aoba is not a woman. Speculations.
Either way, thanks for another interesting chapter.

A little of NoiAo is nice too. I wonder if Noiz will visit again also. Poor Aoba. He's heard the same thing many times before from many different men. He probably does not want to get his hopes up, however sincere Noiz may be. Aw my little Aobaby...