| Reviews for Lightweight Double Dreams |
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DanTDM chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 That remark about the "sexy" review button was funny, and the nudges and winks made it funnier! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! |
JUSTICYKES chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Shit son. |
Some dude chapter 1 . 6/25/2015 Yo. |
ClairePuff chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 Wow. You portrayed Athena and Apollo really well. The awkwardness was very convincing. And that was a very amusing story. |
Flimsy-Badge-man chapter 1 . 12/16/2013 Alright for what it's worth, at least. Just one suggestion: For the love of God, please, PLEASE, don't put little tiny "author-style notes" in the middle of the story. Notes are reserved for the beginning and end of a story. Putting them in the middle of a story acts a bitch-slap to the narrative, breaking the reader away from the story. Thank you, and continue to write. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 Hahaha, I adored this! |
XellossLina chapter 1 . 11/17/2013 That was a really cute story lol It's sad this pairing isn't more popular, they would make such the perfect pair! |
Sakura Blosssoms chapter 1 . 11/8/2013 Thank you so much for fulfilling my request! I deeply apologize for not reviewing any sooner, school has been keeping me quite busy. Anyway, I'd just like to say this was great however, the story was a bit not as attention catching as your other stories. I have to admit, it was a bit difficult for me to keep my attention on the story. Overall, I still loved the story. Once again, thank you so much. Now I'm craving more of your writings of this pairing, hoping to have more of you soon! (: |
SgtPeppersLHCB chapter 1 . 11/7/2013 Whoaa steamy! I'm so glad you wrote another fic for this pairing, it makes me happy! My only suggestion is that you should go over the story again and spellcheck when you get the chance. :) |