Name: Jason
Poke-Human type: Arcanine
Gender: Male
History: Use to live a happy life with his family until one day durin an arguement with his brother Jason lost his temper and his powers awokened and he lost control setting the house on fire killing his family. Now lives with his nan
Personality: Jason is a very sarcastic guy who reveals very little about himself. Tires to keep people at a distance as he fears losing control again. Will eventually let people get closer but it takes time and when he does he is a very loyal friend. Does have a fierce temper especially when it concerns his friends. Tries to be protective of others to account for his past
Family: Mother father and older brother Kevin (all dead) nan
Appearance: Jason is 16 and 5'8" tall slightly tanned and tonned (slim and athletic not muscular). Has spikey black hair with red tips to the spikes and dark blue eyes
Outfit: Jason wears faded black jeans with red converse. Has a black short sleeve shirt half button up over a red t-shirt. Wears a sweatband on each wrist which is half black and half on fire

Nice descriptions of the Pokemon. I look forward to the next chapter.

Name:Shira Weathers
Poke-Human type:Lucario(She can control Aura)
Gender:Female
History:She lived a normal life...sort a young age,she was very sweet and that all change in one day:When her father left her mother and then had trust issues,and became a bit cold-hearted,yet deep down she cares about the ones she loves.
Personality:MAJOR tomboy,rebel,a bit cold,leader,calm,risk-taker,yet loyal,kind,and caring,yet keeps a tough image.
Family:
Mother
Father
Aunt and Uncle
Appearance:Short black hair with blue streaks,has tan wears a yellow blouse,and some blue shorts with black sneakers.
Anything else:She may be in love with Matt,yet she'll never admit it.

The chapter was short, but I personally liked it. The men that were hiding in the bush...it adds a little suspense as to what's gonna happen next. I'd say have the characters wake up in a strange building. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I noticed that you said Riley had a black hoodie. It is actually blue. I can't wait till the next chapter.

I think you did pretty well portraying Riley. Nice job for the second chapter. Maybe the strange men should take them into the woods. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Name Wolf (short for Wolfgang, but he hates that name)
Poke species type zoroark
Gender male
Age 17
Personality A joker. Really good at disguises and acting. Has a habit of coming out if nowhere. He can be very helpful, can always put a smile of people's faces with his jokes and wisecracks. He has a really good memory, he only needs to hear something once to say it again almost word for word.
Appearence A few inches taller that average. Has a lean and agile build. He has light blue eyes rimed with silver, has platinum blonde hair that frames his face and is unevenly cut(can't picture it just think of Paul's hairstyle and you'll get a good idea). Likes to wear grey, white and gold colors. A grey jacket, white shirt with gold designs, grey pants and grey trainers.
History. At age 6, he went into foster care and had four families before he was adopted by a family in Utah. Most of his life he worked at a animal shelter which made him good his animals, when his adopted dad died of cancer, he had to drop out of school to help support his family.
Family 42 year old mom, three siblings two brothers two sisters, Callie age 14, Noah age 12, Nate age 9, and Natasha age 7.(I don't care what they look like)
Anything else you should know he is way stronger than he looks and is easily angered by people outside his family

Pretty good. The men were in the woods so they should be in the woods.

This is a very interesting fic, I have to say. It has a lot of potential to develop into an awesome story, so keep up the good work!

Name: Liam
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Poke-human type: Latios

History: Liam grew up in a medium sized house in CA. His parents were soldiers and he hardly ever saw them. Shortly after his 14th birthday his parents were listed KIA. He was given their dogtags and then went to tell Stella, his girlfriend, the sad news. When he arrived at the meeting location he saw that a pair of men, in their 20s, beating her. He threw a rock at one of their eyes to get time for Stella to escape, even if it had a heavy cost. He lost to the men and was hospitalized for several cracked ribs, a broken leg, and a shattered arm. His powers were awoken while he was asleep in the hospital.

Personality: calm, calculating, bit of a prankster. Cares deeply for those select few in his small social bubble

Appearance: Mid sized, Dark blonde hair, darker green eyes with gray rings around the iris of his eyes, semi muscular.

I hope u find a good use for my character. His history is based off(sadly) too many true stories. NOT MY ACTUAL HISTORY.

* Super excited that I can have my own character inside someone else's story and I added some stuff just to make it more informational! Can't wait to read the next chapter*
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Name: Haya Shimizu

Age: 16

Poke-Human type: Glameow

Gender: Female

History: Haya grew up being the middle child in her family. Her Mom and Dad usually wrote books, while her siblings would also do something quiet. It seemed like that for years, but Haya never liked following others. So, she started acting. Wherever she could go she would act. That's when she decided to leave and start out her acting career.

Personality: Haya is arrogant and sly. She usually starts drama and usually it's on purpose. As being a cat pokemon, she is clever in getting whatever she wants. It's usually because of her nonstop talking, but she is great at making "friends" and knows when to behave at certain times, if needed.

Family:
- Mom
- Dad
- Older Brother
- Younger Sister

Appearance: (Referring to this picture I saw) Haya is tall for her age which is slightly taller than some people, but shorter than others. Her skin color consists of being the color of a human who's race is considered to be "white". Haya's body is thin and she has a well-defined build. Her eyes are cat-like, but not completely. Her hair is short, the color purple, and it usually stops before touching her shoulders because it curls at the end. She normally wears a purple dress that always stops above her knees. It has sleeves at the top and bow at her waist. She wears purple stockings that reach up to her knees adorned with a pair of white heels.

Anything else I should know: N/A

Name: Shawn Knoll

Age: 17 & 1/5

Gender: Male

Type of Pokemon: Dragonair

Appearance: Is slightly taller thsn most people, has light yellow hair, as well as one dark blue eye, and one brown eye. Has light, tan skin, and long, lanky arms and a long blue coat with a large, horn and fin adorned hood, and a long, single coattail. Underneath, he has a smaller, light blue hoodie, as well as darker blue fingerless gloves, and a pair of aviator shades. He wears dark blue jeans with black running sneakers.

personality: He is very shy, and will wear his hood in public to avoid being acknowledged. Shawn is not a very brave person, and finds the simplest tasks, such as ordering food, near impossible to do. He is also a supreme germaphobe, and cannot stand filthy places.

History: He has worked in his fathers library all of his life, so he is very knowledgable about most things. Unfortunately, its also what made him so uncomfortable around other people. He moved from his hometown in order to get a better job, only to end up working in another library.

Hobbies: Reading, being alone and undisturbed, recreating scale models and Marine biology.
Fears: Other people, electricity, spiders, germs of all kinds, heights and loud noise.

To the first reviewer of this story; I'm sorry, but I had no reference for a submission form, so I had to use yours.

Since there is no Oc form, I had to make my own. I hope that is okay.
Name: Riley Winsor
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Type of Poke-Human: Riolu
Appearance: Riley has pale skin, an average build, light brown hair that reaches her shoulders,and hazel eyes. She is often seen wearing a blue hoodie, a black beanie, black pants, blue rimmed glasses, and orange shoes.
Personality: Riley is usually optimistic and logical. She is socially awkward around most people except those that she feels comfortable with. She is a workaholic. She can be brave if the situation calls for it. She can be rude if she is in a hurry. She can be selfish sometimes. She takes charge of the situation if she becomes impatient.
History: Riley grew up in a small town called Leafville where she often read in the shade of the oak trees on hot summer days. She eventually became interested in mythology and ancient legends about Pokemon. She hopes to discover something about an ancient race known as Poke-Humans.
Hobbies: Riley enjoys reading and climbing.
Fears: Riley is afraid of being buried alive and drowning.
Crush: Matt Faze
Good luck with your story.