That was wonderfully written and holy shit! Scary as fuck.

um... Mommy? I'm scared...

What the hell did I just read?

Well-written, sure, but...WHY? Why make a oneshot about Harry driving Ginny to suicide just because he's lost his mind and he can?

What the fuck...

So... Voldie’s Soul Shard from the scar took over Harry?

Not all monsters look evil...Ten Bundy as an example...if I was Draco, maybe I wouldn't get to full of himself...after all Dead Men tell no tales.

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THIS IS A FUCKING MASTERPIECE.

So i knew the basic premise of this-having heard of it before and thought Harry would make Ginny kill herself with his words and she would knowingly do it but wow this was still just as chilling.

Draco's characterization here was also marvelous. Usually when Harry becomes darker, he is somehow more immoral and worse than Draco so their earlier argument-I thought, would be to highlight how much more ruthless Harry did. And while he was particularly ruthless it takes a special kind of cruelty to lie about a dying girl and defend a murderer especially since it would not benefit him.

I am also interested in how Harry did not have sex with her. I assumed he'd be the ultimate ass and take her virginity before she died and he did seem to have an interest but something tells me Harry won't have much trouble finding gratification.

Dear Net Girl:

Is it just me, or does this seem a trifle on the pointless side? I don't mean Harry's actions (though that too, of course), I mean the whole story. It's well-conceived and well-executed, but I don't quite see what you thought the value was in its being told.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Jesus is fucking Christ! Holy shit!

Disturbingly awesome.

One of the most brilliant, amazing stories I've read and re-read so many times on here, fantastic job.

Ooh. Evil Harry. Love it.

Interesting one shot- enjoyed reading it!

Whoa...damn. Brilliant writing.

This really dark! I'm somewhat between terrified and loving this FanFiction. Very well written, and by far this is the best Dark!Harry fic I have ever read

Brilliant. Nice work on this.