I liked that story. I can't imagine what it would be like to lose track of your daughter for no good reason at all. It's great that we know what happened, but she had no idea. So many poor parents in disney movies must have been so distraught when they find their children missing. It's rare that we get to see it. The only example that comes to mind is the madam from the aristocats. Good job on this one too. :)

Very realistic. I could feel the mother's panic and relate to her, even though I'm not a mom. I feel sorry for her. You did a good job writing this.

This is undoubtedly the best-written account of "Boo's" unexplained absence I have ever read, one of the few from the perspective of her parent. Everything is logical and well-thought-out, including the VERY likely premise that little Mary's own parent or parents would be the prime suspects in her disappearance, since it is a very disturbing but true fact that most children who are kidnapped, or killed, are victims of a relative, someone they know and trust. The movie does not go into how Mary's unexplained disappearance must have surely affected her family, because it was not relevant to the plot, but surely they must have been in torment until she returned just as mysteriously as she'd gone missing.

pitbulllady

This is brilliant. I've often wondered what was going on in the human world during boo's time away. Very well written