Chris: It. Was. Awesome! Absolutely amaze-balls! I fruckin' loved it!

Michael: It was very touching and very well written. You made me really hate Keefs character. And it's not easy to make a reader STRONGLY dislike a fictional character, perpously, that is. Very good job, my friend. :)

Beautiful mate, just beautiful.

Sequel? Please?

Yeah, I do want to use the chapter separation, but does that mean I have to upload the chapters separately?

This story wasn't perfect, but hey, I enjoyed it. The plot was interesting enough, and the writing's decent too. I couldn't have hurt to take advantage of this site's chapter system and separate the segments accordingly, though the current format wasn't that much of a bother. I wouldn't mind reading more from you. Well done.

Epic story and epic emotion as well.

i loved it x)