I love your stories they are so good but you might want to work on your editing because you miss spelled some ofthe word in your last story-loving fan kaitlyn

Im loving this story, please update soon, cant wait to read more :)

I love this storie!
I like when there's still the canon but somehow changed. Especially for a sterek.
Just hope that you won"t abandoned this storie

Bonne journée

PS: even if it's somehow cute, I do think that this Derek is too soft now, even maybe weak. I understand if it's what you wanted but I find it weird

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is good don't get me wrong, however you've kinda just dropped in some things without explanation (i've watched the show and who and what is going on, which by the way i'm interested in seeing how you get styles' to be taken over by the ingitsona, considering the divine move is turning evil styles into a werewolf)
like why did deucalion want scott in the pack
and a little more info on how issac and scott convinced Ethan and Aidan to join them so easily and who are they? Aidan's was dropped in a chapter or two ago and so was ethan's but nothing was said at all.

(because i've only read up to this part, i'm still going to do a review based on what information you had)

This is great, although i didn't like the idea of styles' being an alpha at the start the fact that it's 'their pack' makes it so much more ... (i don't have the correct word in mind).
i was wondering will lidia and danny or Alison be join in anytime soon? maybe even a return of Jackson.

all in all though, i'm enjoyig myself.

O_O...struggled to read. its a giant wall of text. i guess the upload screwed it or something? otherwise its good. cant fault it that i can notice

I'm really impatient to know the next *.* It's again the psychotic Jennifer, the b**** ! See you soon I hope :-)

I'm impatient to know the next :-)

drama! I love it!

I'm really impatient to know the next ! *.* I hate Jennifer and I hope that Derek would believe in Stiles than in Jennifer... See you soon I hope :)

well, jennifer is finally out of the bag so to speak. what a complete bitch. why does no one ever be wary of stiles? hes the most dangerous person about the werewolves if you stop and think about it. through sheer determination, willpower and a shrewd mind with a very humorous and liberal coating of often witty sarcasm, he keeps pace with them. if he was given the bite, hed be the most dangerous living thing the world of teen wolf would know of.

i guess that will show her to underestimate him in future

That fucking bitch! How dare she?! She is a slut! Arg! And Derek?! How he doesn't stoo her! Arg! I'm so mad! I wish I can kill her myself!

You are so cruel with them :'( Jennifer is a b**** ! I hope that they will be fine and together *.* I'm impatient to know the next and see you soon I hope :-D

You can't leave me like this I need more! Update soon!

this is the same as last chapter... (