Ok.. ever since he team up with the girls hes become a useless lump. He just sits around does evrrything they want. He fucking pathetic. He has the attention span of a gnat. The story would be better if he just killed himself and the story went on without him.

This chapter speaks truth

I discovered you with How Can I Weaponize This, then The Irrelevant Skyrim Experience, and decided to stalk your previous works. This was really good. It's surprising how consistent your unique writing style has stayed since this story.

So what's next

I would imagine that a sentient pool of lava would be unlikely to be let out anywher

Did you just fucking predict pokemon sword and shield?

Thank you for making legendary pokemon ACTUAL legendaries.

I love how his first pokemon is a Rattata with brass balls. THIS is the Rattata that spawned the FEAR moveset.

Welp. I'm not gonna lie this ending is kind of a major letdown. I'd love it if you came back and actually introduced the antagonist and the rest of the plot, but it looks like I'm pretty late to the party. This ending pisses me off because you had something here thats better than like the top 3 pokemon oc fics, so watching it die like this is kind of heartbreaking. Still, I've seen stories come back after more permanent hiatuses so I won't give up hope just yet.

feint is pronounced feighnt as in 8 not finet as in 9.

Nah the souvenir would be haunted scrap metal dropped by the headless horseless horseman from the hit game tf2

Decent read but very boring you think someone who goes to Pokemon would be excited to catch strong Pokemon and be a badass trainer instead well the eeve thing was cute for like 3 chaps now it's just a boring read oh a semi useless guy getting towed by two girls he's pretty much a useless Brock from original

DefineCaptain(“Axel”)

Hahahahahahahah! I am de captain, now.

I’m a grown ass man and I get you. Fucking Eevee in Let’s Go murders any machismo I might’ve had.

I was promised eevees, I received eevees