oh oh oh i loved this hunting through your tumblr for the bits of it and i love it even more here where i can see it all at once-I'd never found Doctor's Daughter at all, and I actually found 'allons-y' before i found anything else, which made things quite delightfully topsy-turvy but all of it was worth it.

Especially how Agatha couldn't quite decide if she was crushing on the Doctor or John or both. XD

and 'i am the doctor now' hits like a truck every time. As does Twelve's everything.

Awesome job! This is a great story and the ending how John/the Doctor went to find his love was amazing.

I enjoyed this entire mad story so much! Love how you kept the characters true to themselves despite role reversals-so well done. Please write more!

( ; _ ; ) you clever Time Lady. I can't right now... You've just killed me and turned me into a Time Lord and then killed me again and turned me human.

D: Nuuuuu! On to the next chapter!

I really like your version of season 4. This fanfic has a great story line and brillant plot twist. I'm very exicted for the next chapters.

That speech tho... ( ; _ ; ) I swear to god! These two will be the death of me!

)': I've always loved this episode, but your take just made me love it that much more.

I love you both. ( ; _ ; )

Ouch. Now I'm really hurting. ( ; _ ; ) you should write a companion piece with Donna dn the Twelfth Doctor. Cause I'm having the urge to ship them both. D:

I really love how you did the two episodes, I was a little curious about how you'll change the whole River Song thing and I had some ideas, but this was a whole lot better. It was so unexpected and freakin great. Update soon cause I'm hopelessly addicted to this fic.

So you Capaldi'd me and made me have Donna/Twelve feels...how dare you?! Now I have to sit here and think about what it would be like if Donna was Twelve's companion. ( ; _ ; ) great... Now I'm hurting.

xDDD that ending tho! Btw, I didn't get to finish reading this chapter yesterday and now I get to finish and find two more chapters waiting for me. How can you update so fast with such great and detailed chapter?! You're a wizard aren't you? Yup. You're a wizard.

TT-TT the feeeeels

i love your story

D: this had more feels than the original. I applaud you.