good
Would be a pleasure if you read one of my book sakshiagarwal017

loving the story thank you

cute story!
Glad to read they were back on track!
I wonder what Harry learned during his time at Hogwarts, what job would he have done...would he stay with potions or something else?
What about Sirius...is he and Severus still on good terms?
:-)

The biggest bull shit, i ever read!

i think 14 lick with the beltis worse than 3 min with the paddle...

You really need to write more. Your really good.

I loved it!

Nice fic.
But I object the paddle and belt. Spanking should be done by hand and also numbering swats not minutes. Spanking should sting not left the area colored or bruised. I saw you said not bruised but with a 3minute spanking with a paddle that impossible. And never belt... paddle is already harsh and belt is abuse.

Thanks it was a good one

great fic

despite the swearing...God bless

This is a good story. I have nothing against spanking. If more kids were spanked when they needed it, they wouldn't be so screwed up. My complaint is the paddle. To me that is too harsh.

Hey lily of the valley 16

Loved the story, thank you. Excited since it is my first review and is in one of my favorite stories in fan fiction.

Wow great work really
I really want some more of dis plzz

Whoa! This story is great except for one thing. Snape is WAY TOO NICE! Make it, maybe, so that Harry lives with Sirius and visits Snape sometimes.
-Sam
(Eleven years old)

This is a good showing of Harry and Sev's relationship. I enjoyed it. I wonder if Harry experienced any paddling in the Fraternity he visited. If so he must have felt at home while there. I'd like to see more of Harry and Sev's relationship. Maybe you could do a story for how they became a family when Harry was younger or about a time Harry was in trouble while younger.