Nice one shot.

I felt so bad for Emma after that episode! Loved the story!

omg ive been waiting for something like this to be written! its great! loved it!

This was pretty great and spot on, thanks!

You stayed very much in character. I could practically see the foliage surrounding CaptainSwan as I read this.

I feel the exact same way as you!

I loved this fic and I have think the same thing after Snow's admission

Thanks for this. Reading these fics which also take account Emma's POV really help me sorting my mind after last episode. I love Snow and get why she thinks it but I think also Emma a lot in this. And feel sad for her if they don't get to be all real family together.

Ok, so when i watched this episode and heard Mary Margaret's secret i sat there and thot emma would be thinking "you want to replace me". I mean really you say i want to have another baby so i can raise it U may have been first but since we didnt rase u u might as well not even be ours. Come on thats like saying 'hey emma ur not good enough because we decided to have u save the world. So thx for that but now i want to raise a real kid' i mean talk bout stab in the back/heart.

I really do understand where Snow is coming from, I really do. But if my mum had said something like that, I'd be more than hurt.

I thought she and Emma were making so much progress so I'm kinda disappointed the writers decided take their relationship in this direction, though it will be interesting to see what they make of it.

Not to mention the CaptainSwan feels. I can't even.

Anyway, I thought you did a really good job and kept both Emma and Hook in character and I loved the last line. Princess Bride all the way!

I like. And I'm glad you avoided the temptation of turning it into fluff.

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loved their banter at the end too

Very good! Simple and sweet :)

your story is amazing...! Hook and Emma have so much chemistry! Emma's small outburst is more than logical,,,,I wish we watched a scene where Emma expresses hes feelings to her parents and Killian of course :)

I loved this. Honestly, I had the same thought when Snow confessed her secret, and though I understand, I really didn't want to see Emma's face after that confession, because I'm just SO sure that it'll break her even more; she'll feel unwanted, even though she is.

And I really hate that.

That, and I cried when Hook confessed that he loves Emma. Feels overload, what can I say?

Great job, anyway!

Xx Annaelle