Scintillating. breathtaking. brilliant. you weaved a very different tapestry of one of the most popular plots in BV fiction history. I am taken to a different world of savagery, loss, love and hope. intense action and romance. I'm so invested with the main characters. I'm amazed at all the things you put them through and still they manage to survive and experience them. looking forward to the sequel.

Wow I just love your story line! Your an amazing author

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Perhaps one of my top favorite stories of all times. Delightful twists and turns, tasteful scenes of passion, intrigued and just damn great Vegebul. Xoxo.

Amazing! It's been a while since I've read such a captivating plot. I'm looking foreard to see more. Thank you for this.

I've cheated you by not reviewing every wonderful chapter but I couldn't stop reading! Great great work and I look forward to the sequel

I'm so fucking mad right now, I can't even think straight. Urgghhhhhhh. *goes back to her corner and cry*

I am so upset about Amisty right now, I don't even wanna continue (I will but I'm just saying that bc I'm so upset!) Do the dragonballs exist in this world bc someone needs to wish my girl back asap. You know, bc she's played a big part in Bulma's life and the story even though she doesn't appear as much, I just knew something was gonna happen to her but I kept hoping and lying to myself that none will. I think that's what made me love Amisty as much as I love Vegebul right from the get-go; I just knew she was going to sacrifice her life for the greater good. That hurts me so much. She deserve so much happiness. *cries in the corner*

When Vegeta confess why he couldn't allow himself to feel love for Bulma, I had tears in my eyes. That entire scene was so heartbreaking but at the same time, heartwarming. I really like how their scene in front of Frieza and crew played out. I went "awww" when Bulma told Vegeta she loved him and when it's revealed that Vegeta has been practicing with the whip so he'd have better control and not hurt Bulma.

I also liked that Frieza DID spoke up and demanded three more lashes for Bulma bc it fits his character so well. I feel he already knew Vegeta's calculated moves and demanded more for his own amusement. What a evil and cruel bastard.

The ending of this chapter killed me. My heart hurt for these two.:(

I'm on the edge of my seat now. I'm so nervous for everybody.

I'm so impress with how you've kept up with everyone's storylines and made it easy to follow. There's so many things happening and so many things about to happen. It's gonna be chaos but I'm so ready for it all, esp. for Vegeta and Artiria to meet once again. I think they'd make a good team.

Dinner with Frieza was both nerve wrecking and amusing. When Bulma started playing with Vegeta's tail, it was cute and funny how Vegeta had to control himself but I kept thinking Bulma was gonna get caught and I couldn't enjoy their moment until they had left. I love her small moments with Amisty.:) Also love the ending of this chapter.;)

"You're not going to have enough time to divulge into long lost family hugs and kisses."
*jaw dropped to the floor*
What in the world...? This is some very interesting piece of information. I'm tempted to skim through the next few chapters to fill my curiosity bc at first, I thought they were referring to Amisty but after reading that paragraph again, it's Bulma. I'm gonna take a guess here and say Bulma's sister Tights is what connects them. Oh, the curiosity is killing me.

Little Geta makes me so sad. Poor thing. I love Bulma's persistent nature. She's fearless. She's broken down some of Vegeta's and got him to share some of his burden with her. I love how she continues to prove herself worthy of Vegeta's trust (and affection), esp. when she embraced him when he was powered up. And that oh so delicious lemon! So, so good.

Seriously, I've come to love Amisty as much as I love the two main characters. I really hope that before the story come to a close, she and Bulma patch up their friendship. I love and miss their little moments together.

As for Vegeta and Bulma, DAAAAAAMMMMMMMNN. That was incredibly hot. More so bc Vegeta was focus on Bulma, considerate enough to give her a safe word, and Bulma has learned to trust him fully in a rather uncomfortable situation and she enjoyed herself. I'm was so relieved that Vegeta found a way for Bulma to endure the whipping and that there's trust involved. Now I just hope to God Frieza doesn't see right through their plan and screw it up.

I love their conversation towards the end of this chapter. Just them sharing more about themselves. The tail play was really cute. Even though their night ended on a not so positive note, things are a lot better than before.

Ohmygosh, what a brilliantly written chapter. My emotions were all over the place with this one but I have no regrets. I love, love this chapter. I love that Vegeta and Bulma found an equal footing before and after his incident. When she was having dark thoughts about suicide (which broke my heart) and he caught on and distracted and helped her with the droids, God, that melt my heart. I love how Bulma never left his side and even cuss at him not to die on her, haha. They're seriously the perfect match for each other. I also love Raditz's little speech when Vegeta woke up. And Vegeta and Bulma kissed *squel* Loved it all.

I liked the little piece of memory from Bulma's childhood. Seems like something she would do. And I like the fact that ever so sunny and smiley Mrs. Briefs almost lost her cool. Also I'm so happy to see Bulma back in her element. It could get her kill but I love when Bulma mouths off, esp. to Vegeta. Its one of the many things I find attractive about her. She's a spitfire.

Amisty is awesome. I would be disappointed if everything she's done for Bulma was out of duty and not friendship but I'd understand.