Fic's been pretty good but can't help being taken out of it when Naruto starts speaking and acting like he's megamind for some reason. It's kinda jarring how quickly he's becoming an ooc.

Man ion even know where to start this shit got me In tears. I honestly love this story too much to write it I’m words, keep it up g.

Type your review here. Awesome story

This story is great. Never got bored in any of the chapters and is different from canon its just perfect great job dude

DAAAAMMNN just Damn son this series is the best I've ever read so far not to mention it is a complete one. And the ending was just way too perfect

I saw that Boondocks joke...

Boondocks reference ftw

I was ready to hate you for a while, amazing story, i was ready to be as pissed off as yugito if naruto just died though

Ok so you make konohamaru join naruto to fight Orochimaru? It’s fine cause naruto is mage level ok but konohamaru is a brand new chunin. Like do you know how easily it is for him to die? It’s gonna be tough for naruto to take him on himself let alone stop him from merking poor konohamaru. Jesus let the kid fight kabuto. That’s so dumb. I hope he fucking dies just cause they made that dumb move.

If Sakura isn’t beaten brutally in 3 seconds, this is bullshit. Pure bullshit. You made naruto have wood style, sage mode, have shisui level shunshin, be able to analyze things well, be able to create a rasengan with one hand, and access Kuramas chakra and maintain his sanity. Sakura can punch hard and heal. Come on man wtf. Literally. Flash, punch, punch, kick, kick, rasengan. Bitch out cold. Like don’t bullshit me man.

It’s A. Not Ay or Ai or some bullshit people do. It’s literally just A

I always hate novels with hokages that are like well I don’t have evidence so I can’t do anything about Danzo. First off the village is a dictatorship. No one becomes the hokage by being weak willed. Making the decision to execute a potential traitor is just common place. Sarutobi has a reason because he was his old teammate and he was getting old and senile. Literally. If someone helps a valuable asset to the village leave the village to go to another traitor and you have the slightest suspicion of it, you do something about it. Number one: Anbu with blank masks. Number two: Danzo meeting Sasuke in the hospital. Number three: Sasuke saying about how he’s the root in the shadow. Number four: Danzo being the old leader of an organization of Anbu members known as Root who went around with blank masks. Stop making hokages stupid. Confront and execute. What is anyone gonna say? The man isn’t just gonna sit there and let you kill him. Him fighting back is already a crime against his leader plus he’ll be exposed. It’s checkmate fucker.

Susanno is the god of storms not valor wtf

Every time you write a cheesy line by naruto, I imagine the dubbed voice and somehow I get Mickey Mouse saying it . And yeah you make naruto say some dumb shit cause your dialogue sucks

Baachan means granny. Everyone and their mother knows that naruto calls her baachan or granny. Jesus uneducated