This was amazing! You should really turn this into a multi-chapter story, if you decide to and want a beta then PM me and I'd be happy to beta it for you, even though it's so good it really doesn't need one. :)

HP&TWFan

Great story! Would love to see it continued.

Great story! I loved this take on Jasper. I really hope u decide to continue this story! Maybe with Jasper becoming addicted too Bella's blood and or body!

that as just sad

Different. I enjoyed it! :)

Wow. This Jasper I like very much.
Hope you continue.
Excellent

If the wolves find her, she will reek of vampire. and they'll know which one it was.

That was written well. Interesting characterization of Jasper.

Dark and sexy. Makes me wonder if he'll bother to come back, for just a little taste.