Of course kensi still a bitch who cant even speak honestly bout her feelings yet pushes and pushes deeks to!

Wow kensi wonder if she did the same to jack if so no wonder jack ended ul6 leaving her pathetic ass

See its deeks thats hurt and actually going through it all and shes the on getting all the focus on her and her feelings its bullshit but as well just make it a kensi story deeks clearly isnt you main focus

When ever deeks is hurt no one ever focuses on how HIS feeling about his injuries its always kensi kensi kensi

Great Story! #Densi

The beach! *smacks self in the head* Got it! Thank you for explaining it to this slow-minded reader. As soon as I saw that I realized how much it made sense. Great job.

The ending was sweet, if a little OOC. But it's okay, because Densi. :)

One other thing you might want to fix in your stories is using the word lead when you mean led. For example, "Kensi led him to her car." Lead is present tense, led is past. Minor, but worth fixing/knowing.

Hmmmm, that last part felt a bit rushed, but given everything Marty's been through I suppose it makes sense he'd have even less control over his mouth than he usually does.

Couple questions:

1. What happened to Monty? I don't remember seeing anything noted, but he hasn't been around for the entire story

2. Why is Deeks so upset about the beach? He wasn't abducted from the beach, just from the parking lot where his car was. I just don't get the connection.

Like that you had the therapist insist on regular follow-up visits - exactly as any self-respecting (not to mention ethical and professional) therapist would do.

I like where you took this, and the way you didn't gloss over the effects of drug addiction, especially to heroin. I just hope the team will keep to their promise of being his family as well as seeing him as the very good cop/agent he is/will be.

You have some misspelling you might want to fix:

He couldn't bare (bear) to see her inject him.

There (Their) guns were each drawn

about to inject himself with heroine (heroin).

"He wore a suite, but not just any suite" It's suit, not suite. A suite is a collection of connected rooms.

This has an interesting start. I'm hoping it won't get too detailed in the stuff with Marty (not really my cup of tea) and will focus more on the case/investigation, and possibly also the team's reactions to his abduction.

You have a few typos you might want to fix (e.g. "Mr. Callen, you and you're team ... " should be your). I'm also assuming you don't know about basketball, at least at the pro level. A score of 52-33 would indicate a decent half by the better team, and a pathetic effort by the team with 33 points - 20 to 35 points a quarter is typical at the pro level, with most teams scoring upper 80s to mid 90s for the game. That score might happen at the college level, but not at the professional one.

I Really Liked This Story It Was Very Well Written , Had Very Good details And Had Good Pacing Also. Well Done.

Good story! I hope you'll write more Deeks.

Awesome chapter

very good

Awesome chapter!