I am dying. Dying for this precious otp that should have been end game

This was really nice to read. I love Yamaken's roommate so much. He's trying his best to make his otp canon :)
Great job with the story!

very nice. funny.( ilove haru being out in the middle of the ocen)

Mmmhhh this story doesn't seem to be finish...but it's fine! You did well.

He's on a mission! .
But to think that Haru's actually on a fishing boat in the middle of the ocean...only he would do something this ridiculous. I wonder if he brought the rooster along for the ride. -_- Probably...
Anyway, great story! Good job! .

This is beyond brilliant. I absolutely loved your description of her drinks. Spot on characters and hilarious moments. Thank you for writing this, I quite enjoyed it! Keep up the awesome work!

Please please please say there will be more! This was such an enjoyable read and your take on Yamaken's character is practically canon. This was so refreshing. (ღღ)

THIS IS BRILLIANT!
I LOVE THIS AND WANT TO SEE IT! (Sorry Haru, I have nothing against you, but I love Yamaken more x33 )

Very well written and so in character (*a*) and Yamaken's roommate is cool XDD

Update? Please?

OH MY GOD, not only do you have their characterization down pat, your writing is so amazing and the way they interacted was so non-cheesy and perfect and not to mention how you ship Shizuku/Success which is great. Man, it's stupidly hard being in this fandom when you don't like Haru/Shizuku, which is why I value every good fanfiction not about them even more.

But yeah, this is so unbelievably awesome.

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This was ultra cute. Good job with keeping everyone in character. I like all the little bits with the room mate and Yamakens hatred of 'sugar vomit'. Well done, that was a really enjoyable read. This story needs more reviews _

I believe in you, Yamaken. You can do it!

UGH I NEED MORE.

Seriously, this was great! I loved the snarky, unnamed roommate, and your Yamaken was spot-on. I especially loved what he told him about "once you've found the right thing". Wll done!

MY FAVOURITE TNK AUTHOR WRITING FOR ONE OF MY FAVOURITE TNK PAIRINGS-

but no, fangirling aside, this was absolutely wonderful. yamaken is such a cutie here, and nameless roommate makes me grin. i love the way you chose to portray shizuku here as well and just- ahhhh this is all so wonderful. thank you for this!