I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Love it

I like that you're doing this by year. I hope you finish up until she graduates.

OK, so I noticed some things that are written incorrectly or at least I think they are.

"Don't make me to hex you" should be "Don't make me hex you", "She was fighting in already lost battle" is more or less okay, it doesn't matter but this should be an idiomatic sentence which tends to be written as "fighting an already lost battle", they don't insert the "in" there. Intrudence is incorrect, intrusion is correct. "I did noticed" should be "I did notice", and "Let be judge about it" should be written as either "Let me be the judge about it" or "Let me judge it", though I am unsure if the first option is correct myself.

Anyway, the chapter's nice, which means the whole thing was nice. I am going on to the second year story.

she's really studying past her years, isn't she? Repleo. Maybe next chapter will have some conversation of Bella and Snape?

He, I wonder if she really asks Snape about that poem. That could be an interesting conversation, provided he doesn't bite off her head first for going through the trapdoor, and letting the others go too.

By the way, aren't you mistaking word "where" for "what"? This was the second place where you used it wrong - unless it's a native thing I have no way of knowing of. I also have no clue if you are a native anyway, just thought to point it out in any case.

Collateral evidence? Never heard that term, I don't think I even ever heard something like that in my native tongue. Will have to check it out to really understand what it is. Right now I only have a pale idea based on context. Not enough for me. Good chapter. Isn't it "amock" instead of "amuck"?

Nice story, and save for some slightly annoying grammar mistakes very well written, too. And, in my opinion, it doesn't have enough reviews to account for quality, which means I might go back and leave reviews for every chapter to up the count.

I stumbed across this story rather unexpectedly, when I was slowly losing hope of finding something worth reading today. Glad I did find something. I never thought of Bella/Snape pairing to be honest, even though I was checking the Twillight-Harry Potter crossovers periodically for some time, this still came as a surprise. Just not the least bit unpleasant, to judge by this fic. Nice job.

BRILL

:) :) :) :) It's really intresting.

Your story is worth everyone's attention. I started to read your story minutes ago and I can't stop.

This was such a pleasure to read! You managed to make two completely different stories merge together seemlessley. I'm particularly impressed about taking Bella's unreadable mind and making her a natural occlumens. Sometimes with crossovers, it feels like the beginning is rough because there's never really a believable integration of worlds. Everything in your story though flowed together very nicely and I cannot wait to read your second installment in just a moment. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

Kittyinaz mentioned this story series on her Facebook page and now I see why she is hooked. LOVE it.

liked it fun story to read

I'm sad and surprised at the amount of reviews the story has. It is beyond brilliant and I congratulate you on this well written story. I shall move on to the next story :)

May your words continue to flow

HealingRose