| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Return of Heritage |
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   Tishica chapter 29 . 7/22 I love this story and have read it before but oh man I forgot how much you like the word whilst and your dislike of contractions which sometimes interrupts the flow of the chapter. But no hate, still one my better reads. Thanks for writing! |
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 44 . 7/14 I liked it overall. The story certainly doesn't need to be a romance and I'm not a fan of angst, but this Harry seems completely disinterested in girls after admittedly crushing hard on Cho the previous year. I can buy him no longer being interested in Cho, but Katie giving him a quick kiss and then nothing. That seems strange. He seems mildly interested in Ginny, but not really. He finds Daphne interesting and values her friendship, but that's it. Same with Luna, but for different reasons. I don't expect this Harry to obsess over girls, but it seems that his new found confidence would translate to more than asking a 4 year teammate to Hogsmeade for Valentine's Day (as friends) and dancing some with Daphne at a Ball. There were no advertised "ships" so I wasn't expecting much, but I also didn't expect the blood adoption to eliminate his teenage boy hormones. He was adopted by Sirius Black wasn't he, not Remus "The Monk" Lupin, right? Again, I enjoyed the story and thank you for sharing your creativity. |
| erm31323 chapter 40 . 7/12 I liked how you saved Sirius, I haven't read anything like that before. |
| erm31323 chapter 28 . 7/9 I do enjoy when Umbridge gets what's coming to her. I enjoyed the parts with the Ancients Houses as well. |
| Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 34 . 7/8 The magic of wards described is nonsensical. 20 death eaters could break through the wards of Peverell manor, which has stood for a millennia and unconquered(apparently). That too so fast that inhabitants couldn't even apparate out. Dumbledore, staff and entire village couldn't break hastily constructed wards, that too over an entire village with 15 minutes of time. Facepalm. |
| Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 1 . 7/7 This is stupid. Why does he need to fly to the Dursleys when he can apparate? |
| erm31323 chapter 7 . 7/5 I loved the entire trial and defense of Sirius. Harry did very well and Amelia Bones putting Umbridge in her place was one of the best things in this chapter. |
| erm31323 chapter 3 . 7/4 I'm really enjoying all the history in this story. I'm glad that Kreacher seems to be treating Harry respectfully and maybe Harry's treatment of him can rub off on Sirius. |
| wandamarie chapter 44 . 6/29 wow thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 43 . 6/29 holly cow bull poo |
| wandamarie chapter 42 . 6/29 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 41 . 6/29 wow on to the next chapter |
| wandamarie chapter 40 . 6/29 oh my |
| wandamarie chapter 39 . 6/29 oh holly cow poo |
| wandamarie chapter 37 . 6/28 thanks |
