| Reviews for Eternal Things |
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Tracy Runco chapter 1 . 8/11/2018 way to many fics with rape. Why? another one to skip |
Sabyna chapter 4 . 8/17/2004 wow. that was agnst with a capital "A". I don't even know what to say. That was powerful and I hope you write more. |
eyghon chapter 4 . 5/3/2004 god, it's beautiful, I don't have words to describe how I feel, wow... |
michelle chapter 4 . 10/29/2003 i thought your story was good but i'm a big fan of Sarks and didn't particularly like him in that role. but great start on first fic. future references PLEASE try and make Sark abit nicer |
Caitlin chapter 4 . 10/20/2003 That was extremely good, I enjoyed it but it probably could have used a little more Sark, maybe a little more detail or another encounter... |
Xiper chapter 4 . 6/21/2003 Just great! I have no words to explain my opinion, but I think it's great how you've develop the story. You can believe me, I liked the story. You achieve great depth in analizing the issue. Now I'm working on my first story, and it's going to be a sort of summary for a more developed plot. I wish I could explain all Sydney's feeling like you. Great! |
moi chapter 4 . 3/8/2003 . maybe a bit more sark. or vaughn. either one would've been fine. but either way, very good. |
Trella chapter 4 . 12/25/2002 powerful painful to read however, very nicely written although i couldve done without sark being the rapist since hes my fave...nonetheless, extremely well done. kudos |
Rheza chapter 4 . 11/18/2002 This is really gooood. i was gonna read your other one, but saw that it was a sequel to "Eternal Things" so I went and read this first. I'm thoroughly impressed! |
Lady Ice chapter 4 . 10/28/2002 You need more Sark and more Vaughn, but pretty interesing. |
PorcelainDoll chapter 4 . 10/13/2002 i have to tell you that was one of the best stories i have ever read. it was just excellent. i am throughly impressed. i cannot wait till you write another story. and you better write another one soon! |
the only one chapter 1 . 10/4/2002 you shouldn't have added the champagne comment... it totally gave it away! well, not really but it could have been a cliffhanger. tOo |
AfterTheFall chapter 4 . 9/26/2002 WoW! Thats all i can say! exellently written.. Just one question... Thats not the end, is it? *pleasedon'tbepleasedon'* It was a good ending if it was, but if it is..*pleasepleaseplease* write a sequal..? Cheers! |
Jengga02 chapter 4 . 9/26/2002 oh wow. i really like this, and how you update really quickly. i would say put more vaughn in, since you're leaving us hanging there, but that's just the syd/vaughn shipper side of me talking! lol. great job. continue writing. |
Rock Steady1 chapter 4 . 9/26/2002 Wow! powerful inpact on the readers! i would do one more chapter though and have vaughn and syd make up and stuff, just to give it a happy ending:) |