I liked the story but it ended weird

MORE PLEASE!

nice job.
ill check to see if you got any other stories

LONG LIVE JAUNE!
LONG LIVE RWBY!

YES! This is the definitive reason for the Arkos ship. I had never really been able to explain this opposites-attract relationship other than, well, that opposites attract. Thank you.

Well done! You really captured their personalities.

I found this story to be very interesting. It all completely fits the description and the scenarios that would run though my mind, were these two to become a couple in the actual show (which they damn well better). I'd like to see a story based off of Ren and Nora, rather than Jaune and Pyrrha.

Looks great, Good job

I feel as if you'd grabbed my headcanon and wrote it in the exact way I hoped and wanted. I love this. Sincerely, it feels so great.

Just one thing: "but Jaune was never one to make insinuations without hard proof" no, I'm sorry, but he totally is. The whole thing with Weiss came from her calling him cute and scraggly.

Anyways, other than that, I love every bit of this.

A well written story, and a real pleassure to read. This is the sort of quality I'm looking for in stories on this site, but unfortuantely there's not many of them. Keep up the good work, my friend

-Lord of Tuft

That was nice story. I loved the ending it was cute. I hope you will write more Arkos stuff that would be awesome.

Thanks for your story. Hope for more Jaune fics. Very entertaining.

The number of 'awwwwwwwwws' I had while reading this, was unbearable. Great work. Loved it.

That scene definitely got awkward, yup.

Why, oh why, doesn't RWBYGod Monty Oum give our favorite bumbling blonde boy the cojones and the brains to finally ask our favorite red-haired spear wielder the million-Lien question.

Nicely wrapped up though. I love it.

Sanguis out.

Iiiiiiii love this little story. I think I speak for all of us when I say we all saw/see this coming. RT just throws us this knowledge.
YOU, my friend, seem to have a strong grasp on these characters and it just seems to flow so well. Please keep on writing more RWBY fics, because your writing is just too good to keep hidden.

Keep on keepin' on.
-Vipir947

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