Well this is a surprise! One or two grammatical and capitalization errors, but it's entertaining so far.

Now here's a rather rare crossover!

I'm loving it so far, and I think you got the characters pretty spot on! Nice job!

Looking forward to the next chapter soon, and I'm looking forward to the boss battles!

PS: Do try to space out your paragraphs more.

I don't suppose you're going to make more chapters of this because if you do I would appreciate it

I'm going to review first this chapter saying that I like this story and I'm hoping for more chapters. Now going to the Silent hill/Hunting ground business... It would be better if Fiona were just sent to some relatives in silent hill and partnering with Hewie again. (Don't kill the poor dog!) With the specs Ops... I' don't know... I guess I don't care that much about that one, sorry.

OK, so I really like this story. And those questions Jill and Juliet were asking... I think I'm not the only one who have thought about that before, am I?

Are you going to keep continuing this?

Wow, this is epic.

I think it would be a good idea to continue. It's a nice story, kinda cute, too. Plus, you could make it so she meets the other zombie hunters of the family (Gideon, Cordelia and Nick... He counts, he should have his body back at this point.)

I like the story and I think u should continue it if want to

Admittedly, it's been a long time since I read a story with Jill as the lead. It's actually rather refreshing. I think you write her well. In my mind, after the ordeal with Wesker, I imagine Jill would be either angry, insecure, or both. I don't know. Jill became a mystery for me after RE5 and her mind control thing.

Like I said, I don't know know squat about Lollipop Chainsaw or Juliet. But for a newbie, I like it. I might have to go watch videos of it or read up on the game or characters. Anyways, I like it and I like your writing. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Nice story so far. I was thinking something similar. Good job. Can't wait to read more.