Yeah, the confession was a bit rushed, but other than that, I liked it.

HappY Ending..! YAy..!
CUTE..

CUTENESS FTW!

I liked the story. It was cute. I guess May WOULD be down if she lost a contest, and YES, Solidad and Harley are the most perfect matchmakers ever. Like, who could compare?

A few little things I need to say:
- Don't use so much "..." because it's unnecessary sometimes. And think about it. Do people always like drift off while speaking? You're overusing it. (:
- Drew was a little out of character, I would expect his confession to be, well, more cocky? And he isn't the guy to trail off, so again, no "..." so much.
- Your dialogue writing could use some work!

Overall, yes! It's good. Keep it up.

Citra

Aww, this was so cute, i love happy endings! ANICA OUT LATESSSSSS!

I really like it its cute! :-)

Aww that was such a cute and lovely story! Good job, keep it up!