Reviews for Just One Second
Avalonemyst chapter 26 . 7/3
Love this!
Zaralann chapter 26 . 5/31/2019
Heh...
Rainbow Prime chapter 22 . 1/8/2019
Well...you can obviously tell that this episode was rushed. I mean, seriously.I don't know what's worse. The fact that a large portion of it has been cut out, or the fact that there's spelling/grammatical errors in it.
To paraphrase Patrick Stewart: (Who should have been the Twelfth Doctor, in my opinion...)
"Oh yes. This is how it starts. But the road from simple spelling/grammatical errors to a shoddy story is very much shorter than we think. Something is wrong here, Author. I don't like what we have become."
Rainbow Prime chapter 21 . 1/8/2019
Wait...what?! But...the Doctor is a Timelord! He can't just become a Human! It ruins the entire point of the series! I mean, sure, have Rose become a Time Lady! That's all good and well! But the Doctor should STAY a Time Lord!
Rainbow Prime chapter 15 . 1/8/2019
Same here about the thirteenth Doctor. But just wait until the fourteenth!
Rainbow Prime chapter 5 . 1/8/2019
So...to recap: The TARDIS is making Tyler Rose a Time Lady, because only Time Lords/Ladies can drive her. So, the TARDIS is like a klyntar in this story. All right then.
Rainbow Prime chapter 3 . 1/8/2019
Ooh! It's Martha "You never talk, you don't say" Jones! That's going to be an interesting episode...
midnightscar17 chapter 13 . 7/4/2018
How is rose able to know how to do things im honestly curious
ritzmix chapter 23 . 6/18/2018
she thought jack was dead, but she wasn't that surprised to see him... and a few chapters back you called him immortal captain ... i'm confused
Asteria25 chapter 3 . 7/2/2017
It is just, I hope she is more bad wolf? Now apparently there is the doctor doing everything... Besides, human have no issues about kill hostile alien and rose certainly don't feel guilty about time war so why the reactions and lines are identical?
StoryGirlWrites chapter 26 . 3/28/2017
This was an interesting turn of the tables. I have loved every chapter and can't wait to go read the continuance. Thanks for posting this story!
FakeWeeaboo chapter 23 . 3/11/2017
Umm... your Rose didn't seem all that surprised that Jack was back. Plot-holes, as well, I mean, the You Are Not Alone thing was pretty important... but, whatever.
FakeWeeaboo chapter 21 . 3/11/2017
I like how you chose Lilly to be her name, after all, Billie Piper played Lily on Penny Dreadful. Whatever that is.
FakeWeeaboo chapter 16 . 3/11/2017
Umm... I really think the Beatles have more number one hits... and least in '57. They had more chart toppers than Elvis.
misherukuro chapter 26 . 11/8/2016
Thoroughly creative plot twist and very well executed thanks so much for sharing.
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