| Reviews for Pink Parasite |
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SakuraHarunoIsGreat chapter 2 . 7/27 that's hilarious |
Priest chapter 3 . 4/25 This was a rather good story and I would really love to see you continue it, I especially liked several of the funny parts. |
Druto chapter 3 . 11/6/2018 I don't think Kakashi needs to find out |
Druto chapter 2 . 11/6/2018 I wonder what will happen |
Druto chapter 1 . 11/6/2018 Awesome |
Nanami chapter 3 . 8/27/2018 It's a great job, it has a lot of potential, it's a real pity that you left it unfinished, I hope and you encourage me to continue it one day. Thank you for your beautiful idea (I'm not a writer so do not worry I'll never use this beautiful idea since I'm lazy writing). Live The GaaSaku! |
Suzululu4moe chapter 3 . 8/27/2018 lol the pants comment . |
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 8/27/2018 I guess naruto gaara and Kisame are teh only possible romance options for her now. Lol teh duckbutt getting passed out. |
Zeuseus chapter 3 . 5/2/2018 Really hope you come back to this at some point, it's a very interesting premise with a fun ability. I really want to see Kakashi's reaction when he figures things out. I get the feeling he'll help her hide it and use it as an asset. Given how you use Sakura's 'Inner' I'm guessing that for this AU having that inner voice is part of the bloodline, the fact that she's assimilating all those traits of other Psyches is interesting and could lead to hilariously fun results. |
bloomsburry chapter 3 . 4/18/2018 this concept is promising! i hope you continue and update this! |
TheRYU chapter 3 . 3/4/2018 You have no idea how upset i am that this amazing story has only 3 chapters omg its beautiful and hasnt been updated in years. Well weres hoping one meger day you look upon this story and continue it or allow someone else to...please please continue this! |
WinchesterCherryBlossom chapter 3 . 12/13/2017 Please, keep going, your idea is wonderful and I really loved this story, I'll be waiting for more |
AlphaF34R chapter 3 . 12/9/2017 I really hope you haven't abandoned this because it is very good. |
Hmm chapter 3 . 11/16/2017 Sakura merely has to wear bandages and gloves. Could also wearundershirt which she could pull up the sleeves of in a fights. Hair would protect her face from any contant in hugs etc. |
Akira chapter 3 . 11/9/2017 I hope this isn't discontinued. Your idea is wonderful and it has so much potential. A confrontation would certainly be interesting but I think you should leave that for a couple chapters in the future. For the next chapter I would pick out something more suitable such as what happened to Zabuza and arrival at Tazuna's home. Your vocabulary and grammatikal struktures are adequate. To make things less tense I suggest every 10-12k words a small funny scene such similar to how you wrote about Sakura's reaction to Tora. I like the chapter lengths. Sakura's change in character is rather abrupt but with a good reason. To provide additional back up to her skills I would like to read a detailed scene about her training her kekkei genkai. It would certainly make her appear more serious and not like a subtle mary sue. Her training scene with Naruto was a great idea. If it'd be possible... could you go deeper into detail there, maybe with longer conversations? For the emotional department, you've done well so far. If you'd like to improve I think a small scene to Naruto's or Sasuke's reaction to Sakura's kill would do well to add to the already little amounts of angst, humor and hurt. Well I could totally see Sakura freezing somebody's ass off due to her recent "meal". It'd be humourous if the ass was Sasuke('s). |