Wow...

Beautiful, I liked all of it!

That was...wow. I think this deserves a small sequel. Just a one shot where she tells Arthur he can have Merlin and melon and Arthur happily get together and Gwen gets Leon.

Is it just my imagination or do I smell a future Sir Leon/Gwen romance? xD Heheheh. It's so there. And it's such a pleasure to read your fics, by the way. They're so delightful.

Oh wow, amazing writing. Incredible story! I would be surprised if you didn't do it professionally :)

That was a very good story. I loved reading it. It was descriptive and I liked that. The characters were not OOC. I liked the idea of Gwen and Leon. I hope every one finds happiness in the end. It is true that all four of them deserve it. :) You are talented, my friend. :)

Great opening chapter can't wait to see how the story develops

Very well written!
I loved Arthur s struggling over savng his queen or his true love,and i loved Leon and Gwen together!

She should have left him, forget his rep.

Beautifully written story which kept me engrossed.
One wish could we have a follow up as I think to carry on the characters would be really interesting and I think Leon is due romance and how Arthur would cope if they were all living in the castle.