Wow! You're such a solid writer! I loved this story and others you've written and seriously I'm just baffled by how good you are at this. Your characters are funny and consistent and the action moves at a great pace. I know you're probably busy with life now but I hope you keep writing. Thanks so much for the wonderful story!

Apart from the fact that the conclusion felt a bit rushed, this story was flipping brilliant. You managed to pack a load of plot, humor, and depth into a fairly short amount of space, and those are usually my favorite sorts of stories.

I do think it's interesting, going back and reading older stories now, how many people apparently thought that Hook was Peter Pan. I only just caught up to the show this summer after far too much not getting around to it, so I wasn't part of the fandom during that time. I would imagine quite a lot of people were rather disappointed when Pan turned out to be Rumple's dad instead. :P

Anyway, great fic. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

What a great conclusion! Emma's talk with Hook at the end was perfect. She needed to say it and tell him how she feels about him. Enjoyed this, thank you for writing, from Greece and while busy, I was glad I found it.

Why is it Hook again sacrificing himself? Though at least Snow and Charming care enough to try to find another way. It doesn't seem like he could survive. I love his view of Regina and Rumple as 'impotent sorcerers', which in this case they are.

Hook is so great, he's leading, he's managing, he's full of smart talk all while his whole life has taken a different path. His conversation with Snow was interesting.

Regina is written so well, the attitude that she has! It adds to the story. Which is pretty amazing. Can they get the trident and focus on Storybrooke in order to get home? Interesting that several suggested Hook should stay. There's nothing for a pirate in Storybrooke. His conversation with Charming was very good. His history is different and unique to this story.

More and more complications for our heroes just trying to get home! We can blame this one on Rumple though. What happens between Neal and Emma now? And Mulan is quite mad at Hook. Is she just protective or is there more?

Fantastic. Completely unexpected revelation of Pan. Looking forward to the rest.

I am so glad Emma supported him at the end. Regina and Snow were overlooking all that Hook had done for them and the fact he had almost been killed 2 or 3 times because they couldn't explain how he was healed. With magic sometimes you have to accept stuff happens.

This was pretty scary at times, brilliant and clever too. Very different. Evil pixies hanging a man upside down.

Interesting beginning. Very different. I like the aspect of pixie as evil, are there are good pixies too? Hook is intriguing and of course Emma doesn't trust him.

Lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt! I loved your Neverland story and the very beautiful CS feels that blended so excellently with a well developed plot.

I loved it!

Awesome story! I wish that this is the road that they went down rather than Pan as Rumple's father route. Love how Killian's speeches aren't flowery, but they're direct and to the point and he backs it up with his actions. And I do love his interactions with Henry, and of course with Henry being the heart of the true believer he figures out Killian's secret. I also appreciate that Snow and Charming see how Killian has changed and have accepted it rather than their constant mistrust on the show.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks.

Very sweet ending! :-)

Ahhhhh, that was the perfect ending! Thanks for getting this up so quick.