It's a pity this was never finished...

Love your story btw

Well, I wish you’d gone through with your authors notes and put out a Ch15 and get to the scenes you mentioned. This Fanfic is one of my favorites, especially because I love the NaruHina pairing, but also because it’s wonderful to see how Naruto and Hinata interact with themselves. I won’t lie, the first chapter really got to me with the dismal situation the Allied Shinobi Forces were in, especially with all the sacrifices made (Sasuke and B). Overall I think this story was terrific and really wished you would continue. Seeing Naruto actually having to be careful is really enjoyable since he makes smart decisions for once. Here’s to hop no one day you’ll pick this back up!

It’s been 2 years since your last update. I do hope you get to finish the story! I really love your writing style! Please finish the story! Thank you!

Oh my god this is amazing! I love that each of their interactions with the past is full of unpredictability. Yeah they can obviously predict major events, but you’ve added elements I don’t think a lot of the audience expected. Like Kimimaro? Including Orochimaru’s presence in the Wave Arc is genius! I’ve always wondered why Orochimaru was so obsessed with Sasuke or how he knew he was ready in the first place and you’ve provided a more concrete answer other than “Itachi’s little brother.” I also love the different character dynamics. That Naruto and Hinata are realistic and not overly lovey dovey, that Sasuke is more complex than the typical Uchiha Avenger archetype with a whole lod of angst, hey you even gave really minor characters like Kurenai and Asuma their own characters. Basically I love all of this, please, please, please update because this is amazing and you are a great writer and I would love to see more

Good story, I hope it continues, this good hahaha, I had a lot of fun with poor chibi-Hina hahaha, greetings, see you, bye!

Mount Myoboku is in a different dimension like Kamui the only way to go there is to be summoned or be a summoner

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I love this story. Really unique and good writing too. I'd love some more intimacy and fluff between Naruto and Hinata. Great story. Really hope you continue with this as I'm excited to see how it ends.

Great job I hope you continue the story

There is one thing that bugs me, I mean they're married right? So why isn't there a sense of intimacy? No, I don't mean Lemons or smut, just holding hands or something along those lines. Right now, your story's characters seem like they're best friends who are together on a mission. There is clearly a lot of time on their hands with major events at least months away. I understand that older couples aren't very keen on expression, but they're just 21-22. I hope you can reply to this.

your idea is crap No two individuals can exist with out destroying the timeline...

SIGUE

First impressions? I love it. I love how detailed it is, the length of the chapters, and how unique the plot it is. I am quite interested on how the story will process.

Please update soon