lol poor steve bring on the porn lol loving this

Haven't commented since the first chapter but had to give this one some love , It was really sweetabsolutely about damn time lol

Following your Golden rule lol. So far so great you capture everyone's personality exceptionally well. I really feel like I'm watching the movie. BTW I'm a huge stony fan so hopefully the rest of the story is as good as this first chapter. Good job

Wow! This was such a well-written story! I have only ever read one story(with sequels) about Natasha and Pepper, and I love them! How you portrayed Thorki was perfect! I love these characters so much! And STONY! Ah! My #1 OTP! This was great! They are so sweet and caring in their own unique ways. Great story!

Always makes me smile seeing the insane character development through this story! Loved reading this again!

And so it begins! So excited to be reading this story again.

It’s so crazy seeing that side of Cap!

Pepper is so done with both of them. It’s the background characters that make the stories the best ones.

Again, Fury is my favorite. He’s so essential to Avengers fics

My second time reading this story! Cracks me up every time at the very end. I can hear how Samuel L. Jackson that line is.

LOVE IT!

I really love this story!

As far as I read in this fandom with stony pairing, this is the best portrayed stony characterizations without overlapping with the actors behaviour. I mean, as stony fans, I know how Chris Evans (easygoing type, cheerful, etc) is very different with Steve Rogers (serious sholdier, always polite) but sometimes in some stony fanfiction, their characterization overlapping. Not totally out of character because both are kind hearted guy, humble, charming etc but...you know, they are still different.

And here, this fic is very rich in characterization.

Not only Steve, but other avengers too, imo. You stick to their character till the end. Steve always polite, Tony always gives sarcasm comment even in his quality time with Steve LOL I like how they started their relationship without saying much about their feelings but the kiss—I think—already enough to define their feelings.

The relationships development are great! It is not too slow or too fast. Although, maybe Bruce-Clint and Natasha-Pepper are a bit fast but as you put the main four character are Stony and ThorLoki so I didn’t think it’s significant. Also, I like how Loki and Thor become lovers. The mating season like Loki’s is one of my favourite type of story (other than soulmate themed) and he is so cute with Thor! I’m not a fan of ThorLoki pair but this fanfiction show me how adorable they can be if they’re together!

How the avengers call Steve and Tony with ‘Stony’ it’s really funny! Very precious! LOL

Just wondering, why didn’t you make Loki be a Carrier? I love to read him bearing Thor’s heir if possible ;) by the way, this is the first story I reviewed in Avengers fandom~ I hope this review didn’t offend you :)

All in all, this is a great fanfiction! Thank you for writing this and sharing! Hope you’ll write Stony more in the future!

Just letting you know Jello-o has been around since 1897. Could be cute if they could bond over it instead :)

Beautiful :3

awww there still not unlatched. poor guys and there mixed up feelings.