Wonderful story, one of my new favorites. I love how well you describe the interactions between Jack and Pitch... So detailed and yet at that same time the plot flows so smoothly.

I love how they kept caring for each other all through there struggles. Most couples would give up on a relationship in a situation like that, so the strength of their love for each was really obvious.

This was a beautiful story, and I hope to see more like it soon. It was very original and unique in it's own wonderful way.

-Joe.

Perfecto best story ever really amazing

AAAAAAAH ITS SO BEAUTIFUL
THE ONLY THING I DIDNT LIKE WAS HOW ALL THE CHAPTERS ARE IN ONE PAGE BECAUSE I KEPT LOSING MY PLACE. ️️

That was cute. Probably one of the best rotg fics I've read no joke.

Ammmmaaaaazing

Okay there is no amount of words that can explain how amazing this story is. It's beautifully written, incredibly sad, so funny, and amazingly intense. There was not one moment when I didn't love this story with all my heart. I have to admit I was a little overwhelmed with the length of it but the absence of defined chapters made the story flow beautifully together and I could imagine everything much better than I could with a story with chapters. I. Love. This. Story. I can't say it enough. I laughs, I cried, and I felt anger. There are very few fanfictions that have made me feel all off these so intensely. KEEP WRITING!

I first saw this and i thought, “Wow... this is one long one-shot" but at the end of it i was wowed even more because this has been one of the very best stories i have read and i have read more that enough stories. You kept it interesting but not too busy and the relationship build-up was awesome with all of them even if some were only briefly mentioned.

Wow, I'm rendered speechless.

This story was amazing. Not only was there so, so much to read but the way you wrote it was simply wonderful. It fit all of them so well!

I loved everything about it!
Thank you SO much!

OMG brilliant, lovely, would like more kinky sex pitch jack scenes but over all amazing story... Thank you!

This was amazing and beautiful to read. So gorgeous

Dude this was awsome you somehow meshed the books with the movie while creating your own story line as well as keeping the characters in character but giving leeway for ooc-ness. You rock

This is the best fanfic I have read so far you are a very talented write so please write more!

This story hasn't been acknowledged enough.
You have such a wonderful grasp on the English language and you use it in an amazing fashion. I loved every minute of reading this.

Your development of Pitch and Jack's relationship was first but it was also very thorough. You covered a lot of material in this story.

I can't even begin to describe my absolute live for your attention to detail. You develop your plot line well and keep it interesting the whole way through.

Then there is your character development! You kept them all to character the whole way and you kept their personalities.
You've done an incredible job.

I'd love to see more of your work. This has just floored me.

This is the single, longest one-shot I've even heard of, and that fact is why I decided to read in the first place...So glad I did! You are amazing and this is a masterpiece that only took like, all day to read! XD Glad I don't have a life, it gives me more time to fall in fan-girl-love with more authors. ;)

This story is amazing! It made me feel so many different emotions; happy, sad ...
Thank you for writing such a great story!