Interesting

I like it, really ah ha. The mystery of trying to figure out what the hell is going on!

This fic is not often updated, is it?

I have no idea what the creature you described looks like. Sepentine doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the description. That word is what is throwing me off. It doesn't sound at all snake like in appearance. Bell like body, thick legs, broad tail. How is that serpentine?

Im so confused , lol

interesting concept overall still abit confused but looking forward for more

I don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews its an interesting and original concept unlike all the rehashes people continuously write.

a interesting chapter, looking forward to what you have planed for the story.

Well this should be interesting wonder if Naruto Uzumaki will end up fighting Naruto Terumi in the third part of the exams anyways keep up the great work!

Genial gjj

Interesting story never heard of a where Naruto is the son of mei it's always a paring. Excited to see where this may go.

cool

Good chapter like how u killed Zabuza and Haku in the story but I cant figure out if the swordsman is the real Naruto or if the Naruto with Kakashi is the real one as his description so far matches Naruto but then how is the one with Kakashi fake if the swordsman is Naruto? All in all good story can't wait for the next chapter.

awesome

since most likely that Naruto will turn out to be Mei son how will Naruto react to her if that turns out to be true? Will Naruto life in the village be like canon or more darker? also will you have Naruto be stronger than canon? Have you thought about pairing for Naruto? I can't wait to see on how everything will pan out about Naruto parents, his birth, Mei reasoning for not being there if she is the mother, and where will he live Kiri or Kohona. great story and eagerly waiting for next chapter