Reviews for Once and After
Celestial-loner chapter 11 . 6/2
I hope you continue.
LadyDuragon chapter 11 . 5/19
Very interesting and well written story. Shame it's abandoned.
Precarious Obsessions chapter 2 . 5/4
Im hooked from the very first chapter! You have a beautiful style of writing and such an interesting plot!
cherryblossomszahime chapter 11 . 3/29
This is great!
dlwlrmay chapter 11 . 1/3
I miss this story so much, please update
Lairenna chapter 11 . 12/28/2019
Well I doubt you will 5 years down the road, but I hope this and Now You See It do get updated someday. Seeing as you still did have 5 more days in that 2014 Fanowrimo (stopped on Nov 25th). We all just want to know what happens 3 I like the premise of this story a lot. Has a lot of potential.
Hallowtide chapter 11 . 12/25/2019
Another interesting story !
Gomez chapter 11 . 12/14/2019
Hello! This is a lovely story you’ve made. The premise of this is unusually unique compared to other fanfic I’ve read and it’s gotten me hooked. I love what you’ve done with Sakura, Isobu, and Kimimaro and looking forward to what mysteries lie ahead of them, particularly as Sakura figures out more about the puzzle box and the old man. Thanks for this story! I hope life is treating you well.
thebibliophilerises chapter 1 . 9/8/2019
This is such a good story! I know it's been like, seven years since you updated it but I just wanted you to know that I absolutely loved it!
dlwlrmay chapter 11 . 8/19/2019
this story is impressive please continue! it would also be nice to see if Sakura meets with Deidara on her journey too! Sasuke might even be safe from Orochimaru'fengs If Sai is there... not mention Danzo... if Sasuke came to know the truth about his clan and all before thinking of killing Itachi ... anyways many possibilities and I really do hope to see more of it! thank you for sharing this story! please continue!
dlwlrmay chapter 10 . 8/19/2019
Kimimaro was saved from being target by snake Orochimaru and hopefully he can find a home and bond within his new pink-haired yet current ebony-haired green eye friend
dlwlrmay chapter 9 . 8/19/2019
Kimimaro is you boy!
dlwlrmay chapter 8 . 8/19/2019
hopefully Sakura can find people along the way to travel with her until she comes back to Konoha ... like Tsunade... after all she is in danger from the Akatsuki and she would have no ways to defend herself
dlwlrmay chapter 6 . 8/19/2019
it's really nice to see Isobu and Sakura getting along just fine but I'm really hoping to see her back into the village...
dlwlrmay chapter 1 . 8/19/2019
OMG this story is so good
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