Aw yeah, things are getting interesting here!

That was ver interesting. I wonder if Hanyuu ended up in the future, or just another place, like perhaps the past.

Oh my gosh! I love your fan fictions girl! You totally rock! I haven't been this excited, until my sister Tiffany, bought me a new set of earrings! Love you! Mwah! 3 33 XOXO.

*_* ... Wow... That was just... Interesting, and intriguing.

Dude, or dudet, whatever. That. Was. Just. Intense. Intense bro.

This chapter was hi,aril is, and interesting! :-)

I was more of expecting the story to leave off right when she got back but the story started out good anyhow. I like how you keep kaede's dialogue.

Hanyuu is so annoying! But I still love the story

Awww, now THAT was adorable beyond belief! But knowing the similar fate of many fanfictions before this one, trouble is sure to follow when those last words of InuYasha is spoken!

Love your work

I LOVE how you are revising your story but I just wished you kept in the part when Onigumo said he loved Hanyuu.

What on earth have you've done?
Inuyasha and Kagome suffered more than enough! Could you please let them rest already?
They don't deserve another heartbreak!
T_T

Alright Shippo. Nice to see him get to be the hero in one scene. That didn't happen much in the series.

Wow this Ren fellow sure is a stealth master. Taking the child without waking one of the greatest of tracking demons sure is an impressive feat. Also the comedy bits you threw in were great, especially Kagome's dialog at the end. It made the ordeal a lot funnier then it probably should have been, but was enjoyable and appropriate all the same.