I absolutely adore stories like this that delve into the horror aspects. Y'all have left me on the edge of my seat with a lack of conclusion, and it's both great and terrible. Thanks for the nightmares!

Jesus, that's fucked up. One fucked up story. Even more f-ed up that I'd like to read more of it to find out what happens. Gotta be a pretty good story to make me want to do that. Damn Slenderman.

i know it's been literal years since you wrote this but... holy shit dude

I hope you write a sequel to this because I love where this story is going! So much suspense! :)

You can't leave me in suspense like that! XD
That was so horrofying, I couldn't stop reading. Such a great story and depiction of Slenderman.

great great job! now that's a horror! chills just chills

lucky me read this alone in a dark basement...

This is horror written right. My eyes were wide open the whole time, my heart was pounding and I was truly scared. Gosh, this is absolutely amazing. You have to make this a series. This would be such an interesting series! And if you do, please do not have it in the end have him healed from his mental illness, because you can’t really be ‘healed’ from schizophrenia. Please have it be something realistic. Thanks! I love this too much!

It's well written! Poor Danny..
Keep up the good work!

And oh, is the man in suit Slenderman? xD

Is that fucking SLENDERMAN?!

Slenderman...

Wow, that was amazing! I'm a bit confused on why Valerie would care what was happening to Phantom, other than the fact that maybe he just looked so broken she felt she had to help. I'm also a bit confused on why the Fenton's would help, unless they all have some sort of truce going on...? Other than a few questions, I LOVE the story so far. You're going to continue it, right? And if so, when can I expect the next update?

What a heck. Please, finnish, this is awesome, PLEASE!

aaaah no I needed more

Very well crafted, and horrifying!

this does not feel complete.
it needs another chapter.
it was unsettling but in a good way.