Ummm this was really interesting but it would have been better if it actually followed some of the original story's arc?
I was so lost as to when this should/could have happened in the anime and yeah I knew the unknown guy would probably have been Mahiro but I didn't understand why they didn't know each other.
Feel like I could fit Lelouch and Suzaku of someone else in here and it'll fit right

Oh man, I really like this story! It seems like no matter what Aika did, she ended up pushing Mahiro and Yoshino together. And I kind if feel bad for her but at the same time, since we can see her thoughts, I do think she is being selfish and she kinda lost it in the end. I can't wait to see what the next chapter will be, especially if it is still the Valetines one like you were planning! Update soon please thanx so much! Bye!

Oh, the last chapter OAO.
I feel sad for Aika. I really love her. Like, as a character I love her. She is jealous of Mahiro who was always with Yoshino, she is also jealous of hakaze who had seen yoshino cry.
She really loves Yoshino, and I really want to support her, though I'm also partial towards MahiroxYoshino. Is it a sibling thing? Idk.

Anyway, rather than T, I think its better to rate your fic as M. And in fan fiction terms, M isn't even mature or anything. Rated M means implications of sexual actions, while M is the real rating for sexual intercourse.
Hope you would actually change it before people that shouldn't read it, read it.

This was so beautifully descriptive, and explicit I loved reading every bit of it! Again, thank you so much for writing this, there's so little Yoshino X Mahiro fanfiction, so I'm happy with any stories that come out. And the fact that this story has such great quality and length made my day.

I loved how dominant Mahiro was, and how passionate and intimate they were. I especially liked the way you described each character's reactions. I've read at least 800 smut fictions from all different pairings and this was one of my favorites! I'm sorry most my reviews are so incoherent and short, I have a really hard time thinking of things to say-without sounding super repetitive-especially when I loved literally every part of the story.

Playful arguments are my favorite thing, everything about the two in this story was so cute! I can totally imagine them arguing about this, and I love how you incorporated Yoshino's devious personality.

Having Yoshino cuddling Mahiro was so adorable and Mahiro talking about his intention to get Yoshino drunk to be able to baby him, I probably re-read that moment at least 10 times. There's hardly any stories about the two so I'm really happy to have stumbled upon your collection of stories! I love the way you capture their personalities so well.

The foolish girl...

Brilliant and amazing. That's exactly how Aika would have thought and even through her POV, we can clearly see Yoshino and Mahiro's chemistry. I really like the character study Aika had of them.

Thank you for writing! Please update soon

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!
Goddess! Thank you so much for sharing these amazing stories! I love them! And the last one-! /heavynosebleeds
Guh, I have been craving this pairing since ages. You have no idea just how ridiculously happy I am when I found your stories! Again, thank you so much! Ily! :*

holy hell that was hot!

Well, you're finally back after so long.

That was HOT! Always love reading your zetsuen no tempest fanfics, since you always get the characterization on point!

Oh, I love this one! It really makes me wanna read more about what happens with them afterwards! These are all fantastic actually. :D I look forward to more if they show up!

Oh my god I love this collection! I especially love the final one, it's funny and cute. Good job! :)

I loved this chapter and I hope you can add another chapter that's part 2 of this story, showing us how their relationship progresses :) Great job!

Love these!