Can't wait for more epic chapters

Fantastic fanfic! Cannot wait to read more! Looking forward to see how you write the Valiant. See you soon. Allons-y

Brilliant cannot wait for more

Amazing cannot wait for the Master

Hee hee hee, I never expected to see an update so quickly! Especially after seeing when the last chapter was posted. Thank you!

It is good, with the high emotional vibes that the original episode had with a lot more passion this time. I loved it and really want to see more.

They are two cute! XD

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.

Welcome back! I feel for “Carly”. Update asap please

Oh...oh my...
I uh... How descriptive.
*blush*

Yeah, that was good. I might have gotten a little heated myself.

What the heck! You didn't elaborate at all on the piano? Where did come from?
Shoot...I need to watch the episode again.

Um...I know I don't review often, but I read all of CCW and here I am on chapter 31 of NBTS...

I wanted to clarify that my lack of reviews does not mean I don't like it! Quite the opposite, really. I enjoy it so much I don't want to stop to write a review.

I do want to point out a few things I have noticed about your writing throughout the past 91 chapters. Consider this a 'make-up' review for all the other chapters.

Things I really like.

I love how Charlene can calm the Oncoming Storm with just a touch. That speaks to how close they are, and how much they care for each other.
I love that she was fobbed by the Master. That really adds a sense of mystery to the whole thing. Why, of all people, would the Master save her like that?
What you did, having her in our world, and then get sucked into his and she became a Tyler. That was neat. I was a little disappointed that she didn't freak out more over that...but at the same time, this Charlene has been there since she was a baby. So it was like she was not transported exactly, but like she was merged into an existing person. Barring that theory, the other idea I had was that something/someone powerful re-wrote the memories of the people around her to make them think she had been adopted as a baby. Which just makes me even more curious about this story. Who or what has that kind of power? Maybe a Guardian?
Her irritation over being short. That is just so real. I am not short, but short people have a rough time of it in a world of mostly tall people and stuff made for taller people. That you made outfits for her on Polyvore. That was a really cool thing I have never seen before. The way you set them up with a slow burn relationship. That made it so much better. That she did not start out with the fob watch made that reveal much more dramatic. The way she lost access to her memories from our world, but still has them is a nice touch. Wondering when she is going to get those back. Her Time Lady title is very fitting. She just wants to protect the Doctor, from harm and especially from loneliness. Carly is an adorable nickname. She gets her own screwdriver! Never seen that in any other fic I read. I am sure I forgot some things here... but I want to give you some constructive feedback too. You have improved a great deal since that first chapter of CCW, but there are a few things you consistently do when you write.

Things you can improve on.

1. You frequently use either the wrong word, or the wrong spelling.
Example1: "John Smith woke up from a particular dream,"
You meant that it was a strange dream, but the correct word for that is 'peculiar'
Example2: bawled fist.
bawled is a synonym for cried. balled is a synonym for curled.

2. Sometimes you are missing words. One that can make or break a whole sentence, or even a paragraph. When in doubt, read it out loud. That will tell you if you are missing words or if you need to change a sentence.

3. You often mix up your tenses, which I can forgive, being that this is Doctor Who and all... But when writing a first person narrative, you MUST make sure that all your tenses match up. It gets very confusing very quickly when the tenses do not match up. Especially in the same sentence, which I have seen quite a few times.
Example: She smiled at him and he smiles back.
It needs to be the same. Both of them either need to be 'smiled' or 'smiles'. They need to be the same to keep the tenses the same. AND since it is a first person narrative, if she smiles, it has to say "I smiled at him and he smiled back." or "I smile at him and he smiles back at me."
If you have a narrative, you have to keep it that way. Jumping around with tenses and POVs will quickly derail a narrative.

4. Grammar. It is important. Proper grammar can make a good story really shine. Bad grammar can break a story if it is at a critical plot point. Believe me...I've seen it happen. You are pretty good about it most of the time, but having someone else read it over before you post it will really help catch anything you might have missed. If you feel really uncomfortable having someone else read it, you can run it through a text-to-speech reader and you will be able to hear the places where you need to fix things.

Will this be updated cos I really enjoyed reading it.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON
ITS ALREADY 2019
REALLY WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

Good

Great story. I’m loving the Doctor and Charlene. As the Doctor would say brilliant. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Allons-y.